|Reviews for Untitled|
| Queen Isabella chapter 4 . 1/29/2007
I think that her dad should just call and say he's leaving or kill him off. Then make this a fluffy story, why not? They could prove everybody right and get married, or something.
| Skyme chapter 4 . 11/28/2006
I really like it so far, great job. Can't wait for the rest.
| Vote14Caskett chapter 4 . 10/15/2006
| LAOLOLAKHJJHFS chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
| Ronata chapter 4 . 9/29/2006
great story so far, i cant wait for more
| saturn567 chapter 4 . 9/25/2006
| Bella-mi-amore chapter 4 . 9/24/2006
hehe love her more kissing less talking line. to cute
| goldpiece chapter 4 . 9/24/2006
i think this chapter is very well written, and it's good that they were able to get over this fight, but I think it would be an interesting dynamic to bring in more tension as Brennan's dad gets closer. Have them fight and not appologize right away, you know, they're existing with the tension there for awhile.
| Howdylynn chapter 4 . 9/24/2006
That chapter was very "intimate." Nice. :)
As for ideas? Well, I would like for her dad to express his gratitude to Booth for taking care of his daughter and also give his blessing/approval of him. Then this knowledge would encourage Brennan to commit to Booth- possible marriage and a happy ending? ;)
| dddynamite chapter 3 . 9/23/2006
Wow deep I love I can't wait to see what happense!
| caroldpb chapter 3 . 9/22/2006
All I want to know is what is wrong with Bones, If I
was her I would tell the woman to get the hell out of
that seat and a way of my man.
| dddynamite chapter 2 . 9/22/2006
Muwahaha I love it soo fluffy..I think PG13 is good!
| laudeaell5 chapter 3 . 9/22/2006
You're evil. I hope that chapter 4 will be up soon. Please... :D
Thanks for taking the time to write it!
| dddynamite chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
I love it soo much pleas write more!
| Serendipity73 chapter 3 . 9/21/2006
Great start! I cant wait to read more :)