Reviews for Harry McGonagall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like any story that Harry NOT a lions, those tend to follow JK world to much. i like orginal. |
![]() ![]() I think this is amazing because most Minerva fanfics that I have read ship Minerva and Dumbledore which is very strange since they are like 50 years apart but I love how Dumbledore is like portrayed as sort of a bad character because I’ve never really liked him. I also love how it’s so long because a lot of other ones are abandoned. If you turned this into a book I think it would be like as long as most of the Harry Potter books smushed together! I am writing this on Christmas Eve since I am reading this fanfic while hiding from parents so that I don’t have to help with cooking and stuff so MERRY CHRISTMAZ! |
![]() ![]() I love a Ravenclaw Harry and Hermione! But I miss Ron . I love how your fanfic is actually a good length because most good ones I’ve read just get abandoned |
![]() ![]() AMAZINF fanfic but maybe don’t say “Asian girl” for Cho Chang because Asia is a very big place and includes India, Pakistan and countries like that too! So I’m just guessing you mean East-Asia but otherwise AMAZING fanfic like actually are you secretly Jk Rowling?! |
![]() ![]() Brianna is a nasty brat. I hope you have a good comeupance after what she did to Hermione. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A method for beating the defense curse. Hire a backup with skill and a clown. Have the Clown "work" that first Saturday then leave in "disgrace" while the backup teaches the classes. Rinse and repeat each new year. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have always thought that the Marauders could (and did) keep their own names off the Map, since they made the damn thing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why bring up skipping a grade if they weren't gonna do it? Is it relevant to the plot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Must Padma tag along in everything? I personally think that it would've been more interesting to see the dynamic if it was just a duo instead of a trio. Harry is no longer starved for companionship. But I suppose it is difficult to think outside of the box. |
![]() ![]() ![]() RIP Maggie Smith |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great read every time. I love that Brianna made hoverboards. |
![]() ![]() French people have no difficulty with the “s” sound. It is the same sound in french and english and uses even the same letter. I don’t understand why you have changed them all to “z”. Some french have difficulty with the “th” sound, which does not exist in our language. It can sound like “z” sometimes. The way you have written the speakers of french is very inaccurate and also it’s very distracting. It takes away from the story, which is a very good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wanted to like this. Your writing is excellent. But your characterization of Slytherins is just too OOC for me. :( I’m glad others have found joy with your work, though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was amazing ! It's everything i wish Harry's life could have been , full of love and adventure and with the support of competent adults ! |
![]() ![]() ur right in le last line percy cant even see past his stoobid badge if he did this is what would happen- *SLAP* EMASHUNOL DAAMAJ! |