Reviews for Harry McGonagall
Darious Frost chapter 2 . 9/13
Accio truest is a useful spell. LOL!
antigone.in.wonderland chapter 33 . 9/8
OMIGODS WHAT LUNA SAID HE'S GOING TO COME BACK AS HARRY POTTER, NOT MCGONAGALL AHHHH SO EXICTED.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/2
FYI people Madam Hooch and Gilderoy Lockhart is both Ravenclaw if search Salazar Slytherin you'll find a stern faced old man not an ugly statue like the author/harry stated. I like the fic though i was wondering why the author put all the twisted character to slytherin when they're actually ravenclaws
gigglymonkey12 chapter 38 . 8/30
loved it
Thatkiddemily chapter 15 . 8/30
Don't get me wrong, I love the story but it always seems like Harry is tattle tailing. Like in the books/movies, Harry likes to fight his own battles but in this fiction, he's kind of relying on Professor McGonagall
gigglymonkey12 chapter 36 . 8/30
Hahahhaha. loved the names
gigglymonkey12 chapter 10 . 8/27
I agree with you about if Hermione had been offered to skip a grade in the book...which is why i'm so glad both of them were offered
gigglymonkey12 chapter 6 . 8/27
I like that they're standing up to the bullies, but when Hermione and them made Draco and gang bow down...imo...that was a bit much. She was calling them names too...which doesn't make them any better than the original bullies. I understand the "turn the other cheek" doesn't always work, but that part made me a bit uncomfortable
Tiffany Smithi chapter 37 . 8/12
Hoverboard COOLNESS!
I mean most really really COOL! Hoverboard, and well...everyone else was pureblood so they had not one clue about that sort of thing, too bad for them! I wouldn't want no movies, and Back to Future has awesome stuff in it
Tiffany Smithi chapter 36 . 8/12
I LOVE your story!
Did you do that on purpose?
It was a LOVELY idea though, useing Daniel Radcliffe's name in that manner
I mean really! She can chose between Harry or Harry's copy-and she chose Harry. It's a sweet sentiement.
(I surprised myself with that insight)
Tiffany Smithi chapter 28 . 8/12
I love your story!
You know, a simple definition of a Howler is a really really loud yelling letter. Doesn't mean it has to be ANGRY yeliing...it could be
HAPPY BIRTHDAY,
CONGRATS FOR WINNING THE HOUSE CUP,
MERRY CHRISTMAS,
etc. etc.
Tiffany Smithi chapter 24 . 8/12
I believe that somebody (it mighta been Ron?) said once that a game took three months or somthing..
Guest chapter 14 . 8/11
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/7
So... I take it we're ignoring the whole house elves need a master to survive thing?
Simianpower chapter 2 . 8/4
Just how hard would it be for Dumbledore to figure out who Harry was? This is the year Harry POTTER was supposed to go to Hogwarts. Yet there's no Harry Potter. There are under 40 students (you have only 3-4 per house/gender, so that's around 28-30). Only one is named Harry. He has Lily's eyes. He looks just like James except for his hair color. He's the "nephew" of Minerva, who was one of the three people present when Dumbledore last saw Harry Potter. This isn't exactly a difficult puzzle to solve, and he's canonically brilliant.

On top of that, Draco's right that Harry's the teacher's pet. This is the opposite of canon, where he can do no right. Here he can do no wrong. All conflict is solved via "Harry's clearly right, so let's punish the other guy".

This is totally over the top. Learning a difficult fourth year charm at eight rather than fourteen because "Americans are lazy". Riiiiiiight. And the overuse of it in this chapter, too. Ugh. And the ridiculous lifelong punishment of a student in his first week. Riiiiiiight.

I keep wanting to read this story, and I've tried time and again to start it, but honestly it just sucks. I have no desire to read another 37 chapters of this drivel.
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