Reviews for Harry McGonagall
jacobh18 chapter 21 . 4/3
Also advice stop using the same expressions such as mind rape and well oiled scoring machine
Guest chapter 37 . 4/3
Should have had Harry turn into a hippogriff for the second task as his animagus
jacobh18 chapter 12 . 4/3
In justice part one during the case Harry saysThat's why my aunt taught me legilimency I thought it was occlumency
Guest chapter 12 . 3/13
... Ok... I can't stay neutral to brianna anymore... I now officially HATE HER GUTS... SHE DESERVES THIS... SHE DESERVES IT... disgusting little girl... Though I still don't approve of Harry almost calling her a bitch...
Guest chapter 11 . 3/13
If I was in this universe and I ran into this Harry, I would punch his forehead where his scar used to be... And then I'd punch him in the face just in case it wasn't Voldemorts influence that was causing him to have such a disgusting personality... And I don't know what to think about brianna...
Guest chapter 5 . 3/12
Well I wouldn't have been surprised if Tolkien was a wizard with the books he's written if witches, wizards, and all that actually did exist... Good idea to ad that in! Hahahaha!...
Guest chapter 2 . 3/12
Oh come on... Don't be mean to Ron, the poor guy's had a tough enough time already... Well not really, but still! He doesn't deserve it, he can still be Harry's best mate, only difference is he won't be attracted to hermione maybe! He really doesn't deserve the bad treatment... But it's your story, whatever... Whatever...
jenniferleigh2013 chapter 12 . 3/12
I would absolutely hate having such a hateful brother like Harry. He's turning out to be a liar (he knew his team was cheating), nearly calls his 10 year old sister a bitch, and mocks just about everything about her.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/11
hmm, Harry and ginny I'll admit was a little... err... Uncomfortable in the books, I think hermione and Ron was actually slightly satisfying... So I find the hermione Harry romance in this slightly disappointing... It's a good story besides that one little detail though...
myafroatemydog chapter 38 . 3/8
Well damn that was an excellent chapter. All th action and that ending. Another great chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 37 . 3/8
That was a very interesting second task
myafroatemydog chapter 36 . 3/8
This was such a cute chapter. I really like where this fic is going?
myafroatemydog chapter 35 . 3/8
Another excellent chapter an interesting first task.
myafroatemydog chapter 34 . 3/8
I'm loving the changes you have made to this story and made it your own I look forward to reading the next chapter to see how you have done the tournament
myafroatemydog chapter 33 . 3/8
I like the way you have handled and turned this fic into your own it's very unique approach
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