|Reviews for Harry McGonagall|
| julia.quizon chapter 2 . 6/16
I think this is a fantastic story, almost like a mini version of the actual series. I think this story is done, but so far I've liked the changes. One thing that I did notice is that the Ravenclaw way of getting into the tower is different. In the books, they have an enchanted knocked that would give the Ravenclaws a riddle to solve before entering. I thought it would have been interesting to see Harry and Hermione try to solve these riddles. Oh and I liked that you didn't force Ron on them. It was nice to see that they all did meet, but it makes the biggest difference. It's a great story!
| Guest chapter 36 . 6/4
Emma Watson and Daniel Radcliff? Really? You're not even trying to be subtle here, are you?
| Vampireking40 chapter 4 . 5/23
Snape is truly getting what he deserves.
| Corneliusduke chapter 34 . 5/17
I was hoping that being in Ravenclaw Harry would avoid this. The triwizard tournament is sheer drivel, and so nauseating. I would think any magical would cancel out any thing like a 14 year old's forged signature, that is pathetic. Harry should never have been allowed to take part that's just common sense. "Magical contract ", what a load of crap.
| Ezzin chapter 5 . 5/14
I knew it! Now all I need is a time turner and I can be with my beloved, Legolas.
| long live the wilderness chapter 1 . 5/10
I know you wrote this a wee while ago, but I just wanted to point out that the way you speak of house elf enslavement connotes that Brits (and possibly Europeans?) are okay with slavery. I know this isn't what you meant at all, but I found it a wee bit hard to swallow.
Maybe if you focused on pureblood wizarding society instead of saying that because the McGonagalls are Americanized they don't agree with slavery.
Again, I mean absolutely no offence. I'm really enjoying your story, I just thought I would point this out :)
| CaBuckeye chapter 27 . 5/4
Brianna is getting to be a "one-trick-pony" anymore only showing up to tease H/Hr. I am the eldest of three and even my patience would have snapped at this point.
| CaBuckeye chapter 4 . 5/3
... Brianna naturally gloated to Harry about that on Thanksgiving Day...
Harry can reply that the US does not celebrate Guy Fawkes Day (5 NOV) while the UK does.
| MaelstromMVF chapter 1 . 5/2
Love it :) And the name change for SPEW was ingenious. At least Harry has some sense in his falsely blonde head.
| torlan2003 chapter 38 . 4/24
Great story, the maze was excellent. All of the tasks were very inventive. I hope Britain does not start bad mouthing Harry. Looking forward to the sequel. Thank you for writing.
| torlan2003 chapter 25 . 4/22
Great chapter, I was surprised that Harry admitted anything to Remus. I thought he would send him to see his Aunt. I would think quite a few people new Harry's birth parents. It did give him a chance to connect with his birth parents thought. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| torlan2003 chapter 20 . 4/21
Great chapter, what happened to the diary and the elves? I look forward to finding out. Thank you for writing.
| torlan2003 chapter 12 . 4/20
Great chapter, the trial was excellent. Seeing Dumbledore held accountable in court and questioned was well done. Thank you for writing.
| torlan2003 chapter 2 . 4/18
Great story, I thought Harry's reason for going to Ravenclaw was good. He would be accused of special treatment in Griffindor. The Magic world seems to thrive on special treatment. I think they would both be accepted in Ravenclaw. Thank you for writing.
| 1Aussie Nerd1 chapter 1 . 4/17
It is rather long, I don't like some of the ideas you had but I enjoyed most of the ideas. My favourite bit of world building being the ability to aperate via telephone.