Reviews for Harry McGonagall
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 5 . 11/30/2006
yeah great chapter.
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 4 . 11/30/2006
yeah great chapter.
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 3 . 11/30/2006
yeah great chapter.
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 2 . 11/30/2006
yeah great chapter.
delete-account-please 742011 chapter 1 . 11/30/2006
yeah great chapter.
anaknisatanas chapter 6 . 11/29/2006
YAY on the lawsuit to be filed against Snape! I love this story, I wasn't it expecting it to be as good as it is due to the summary. I thought it would be Minerva raising Harry without DUmble's approval or something like that. This is much better. I also love the length of your chapters, they're nice and long! _
lady sakura cosmos chapter 6 . 11/29/2006
good chapter
Kin Pandun chapter 6 . 11/29/2006
Ah, Hermione starts her blackmailing career early. Also, deserved pranks and flashes of seeker brilliance. And what's this? Snape's being misunderstood once again, isn't he?

Thanks for writing,

E.G. Potter chapter 6 . 11/29/2006
Good question. They probably thought it was mialfunctioning likr Harry did when he saw Pettigrew on the map.. Good Chapter!
Schnuff chapter 1 . 11/29/2006
good start
dfcole chapter 6 . 11/28/2006
Great chapter! Plz update soon!
Stygius.Magic chapter 6 . 11/27/2006
nice chapter... look forward to more, i like the whole mini Marauders, its fun... btw. go spiderman.. lol

as for your observation, neither Fred nor George would have needed to know who Peter was. even though many people knew the story behind Harry Potter, not many knew enough, or what they did know was just propeganda. and since even hermione did not know of Sirius's and Peters involvement, i am guessing it was never written about. so far anyone looking at the map, Peter would have been just another student. anyway, thats my defence for JK Rowling, but i agree there are many holes in the story...

anyway congrats and update soon.
Invader Crystal chapter 6 . 11/27/2006
LOVE it! Why can't my SRMTHFG fics be as good as this one? *Sniffs*
Aqua Mage chapter 6 . 11/27/2006
Great chapter. I have often wondered about Pettigrew as well...
Lady Foxy Roxy chapter 6 . 11/27/2006
i love the story so far.

I think fred and george didn't see it because they weren't directly looking for it. Maybe they thought he was just another student, they can't know everyone right? Plus they probably didn't know the whole story about James and Lily's deaths or the whole story about Sirius.

Update soon!
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