|Reviews for Harry McGonagall|
| Fluffy chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
Well written. I hope to see you write more on it. Might have developed a H/Hr relationship a bit too quickly there though so be careful with it? Good job including F/G with the map there, wasnt expecting that at all, though i suppose i should have.
| Lily Hermione Potter chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
| Anime Princess chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
WOW! I LOVE how the twins found out about Harry! The Marauder's map is at it again! And Dumbledore and Snape's little secret is out! COOL! I LIKE IT VERY MUCH! POST MORE ASAP! ANd Hermione is DEFINATELY a smart witch to have figured out Harry's true name! POST MORE ASAP!
| Jussgee chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
I love it! Great work with the characters and the whole story.
| BMcGonagall chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
O I didn't know how you where going to put the troll in and there it was briliant. the prank was gold gold gold. I am very impressed with the quality of the work you are submitting so keep up the good work. and the way you have written Minerva is perfect uptight but fun and layed back in some areas . keep up the exelent work.
| Gundum M chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
still enjoying it. I like to see a threat of dumbledore finding out harry's secert. I aslo hope to see some harry/hermonie romance type stuff. Hope you update soon.
| ThunderGod Stormbringer chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
That was Percy, not Penny..Penny comes across as responsible, but not over the top like Percy..:}
| E. Killjoy chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
How grand, a third lovely chapter. Keep the good work up.
| BullDozer chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
Interesting story and very well written. I hope the next chapter comes up soon! Keep up the great work!
| islington bus no. 199 chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
This was a great chapter. I love how you've taken existing events and modified them to fit the new story. The prank was greta and i loved their wayh of defeating the troll.
| morriganscrow chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
This is an excellent chapter, your blending of canon and AU is seamless and interesting. I love the Twins, so more of Gred and Forge would be a good thing IMO.
Would you be willing to keep Harry's American friends separate from the Hogwarts part of his life? Please consider keeping them as two separate story arcs.
I do look forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work.
| Bloodless Ace chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
Great chapter. :)
| BrokenWingedAngel16 chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
please update soon
| athenakitty chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
Makes me wonder if Snape and Dumbledore's making themselves unpopular with the other teachers. Wonder if someone would get Dumbledore as well? Well, at least Penelope is more responsible than Percy.
| LegalAlien1 chapter 3 . 10/7/2006
That was a great new chapter!
I'm quite disappointed that Dumbledore lets Snape read the pupils minds without even reprimanding him. I do hope that there is something they can do besides learning to shield their minds (e.g. write to the board of governors or the daily prophet).
I also liked you version of the troll incident, but I'm glad that Hermione isn't angry at Harry any more.
Please write more soon!