|Reviews for Harry McGonagall|
| albert87 chapter 5 . 11/12/2006
very nice story. please keep writing :)
| Eisbaer Connor chapter 5 . 11/11/2006
huui...this story is awesome...harry kidnaped by mcgonagall...i never thought this woman could do it...
i hope i can read a new chapter soon
greetings from germany
| Memory King chapter 5 . 11/11/2006
This story is very promising and it has a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to see your take on the Stone plotline. Hope Harry won't screw up the fight with Quirrell and let himself be descovered as the BWL. It would also be fun if Harry never goes down the trapdoor and just lets Dumbledore capture Quirrell, or just lets his aunt take care of the problem. The paralell between the Ring and Horcruxes is also quite interesting, looks like you're going for an early Horcrux hunt. Hope Snape gets sacked and maybe Dumbledore also. What about making Flamel Headmaster? I've never seen that done before. Anyway, keep up the outstanding work and update sonn!
| bmatsea chapter 5 . 11/11/2006
wonderful chapter as always, the lenght was purfect. waiting for the next chapter eagerly.
| dfcole chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
Awesome chapter! Plz update soon!
| Daisydill chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
The mirrors for Hermione and her parents were an inspired idea, quite ingenious. You know, I forgot that Harry was in Ravenclaw until you mentioned it in this chapter. Opps. And the LotR series being magical history is very amusing, what about the Simalirrian, or whatever it's called? I've never read it, but I know its the same world, just earlier in terms of time period. And I hope that Snape gets dismissed, or at least an alternative teacher is put in place. Great chapter!
| harrymione4ever7 chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
i loved it update soon plz!
| Kin Pandun chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
That seems like a fantastic vacation. I'm thrilled at the lawsuit (That is gonna be good), and I can hardly wait to see what the good news on CARE is.
Thanks for writing,
| Ash Inigo chapter 5 . 11/10/2006
sorry, this isn't really a review but i can tell you i follow 'if you can help her' and 'more imp...' so no worries in trying to make a fan out of me. it was just weird when just this morning i was reading a buffy and lotr crossover when i thought about the one ring being sauron's horcrux... but to have someone else say it a few hours later?
hahaha sorry just a funny thought. though, is this fic going to cover the hogwarts years?
| riegert8 chapter 5 . 11/9/2006
I like the chapter.I like that Harry found a way tha Hermione could talk with herparent's and Harry. I like that McGonagall is finding a new way to deal with Dumbledore and Snape. Good chapter
| riegert8 chapter 4 . 11/9/2006
I like this chapter. It good that Dumbledore and Snape is in the paper. good chapter
| riegert8 chapter 3 . 11/9/2006
I like this chapter. It is nice that Harry help Hermione learn to fly a broom. I like how Harry and his siter joke with each other. It sad that Dumbledore and Snape like to read students minds, it should bother Dumbledore that he can't look into Harry mind. I am looking forward have answer for his crimes, I think it worse for Dumbledore since suppost to protect the student which he is not doind. I like that Hermione is going to learn Occlumency. Fred and George learn Harry secret, I have say I don't care the twin too much and hoping they get pranked. You can understand why Hermione get finding out who Harry really is. Good chapter
| islington bus no. 199 chapter 5 . 11/9/2006
Your chapters are all so long and detailed, it's wonderful!
I particularly liked Harry’s mirror vibrating like a mobile phone, that was really cute. I don’t know if cute is the right word but it seems to fit. Adding in missing the Nintendo was a nice touch, after all wizards don’t really have an equivalent and that seems really true. I small detail that makes the whole story more realistic.
Making the broom shrink and expand was really good too, very useful and I also liked the new way of Harry showing off his quidditch talent.
The solicitor was also really good; I like the mixing between the wizarding world and non-wizarding concepts in all the ideas.
My favourite part was incorporating lord of the rings making it history too. I hope it has more of a part to play in the story!
| riegert8 chapter 2 . 11/9/2006
I like this chapter.. I like that Harry and Hermione meet up on the train and they get the chance to met new people. It is great that him and Hermione are both in Ravenclaw. It sad that Snape try to read Harry's mind and Dumbledore let him get away with anything. I believe I know the reason, but I am keep to myself till I read it in the story. Good chapter
| Phoenixidon chapter 5 . 11/9/2006
This is a pretty cool story and im pretty picky in what i read i like it