Reviews for Harry McGonagall
bentown chapter 12 . 6/18
ooooooooh, I'm loving this. Snape gets his just desserts. And dumbledore is exposed as a bad headmaster. Fantastic interpretation.
XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 2 . 6/17
XxXLuvTheOriginalsXxX chapter 1 . 6/17
bentown chapter 7 . 6/15
I'm loving this. Harry shipped with Hermione, Ron recognised as irrelevant. Perfect.
And the story is coming along very nicely. :)
irrelevant chapter 2 . 6/10
Nice story, haven't read one where Prof. McGonagall is the one to "kidnap" Harry. I quite like your storyline, however I feel that you insert a lot of your own personal opinions and preferences about the magical world, especially magical England, in a way that is a bit too obvious to me (as in it seems to me that you're making the changes due to very subjective reasons). I hope this doesn't offend you, as it is just my personal opinion :)
Keep up the good work!
C.Menard chapter 39 . 6/2
Excellent story! I've been power reading this past week to finish, it was that addicting! Very, very well done! On to the sequel!
Daniel6 chapter 37 . 6/2
A gryphon has the body of a lion, the wings, talons and head of an eagle. What you described was a winged lion.
Daniel6 chapter 36 . 6/2
Emma Watson and Daniel Radcliffe? :-D
Daniel6 chapter 17 . 6/2
That psychotic elf mentioned Harry Potter multiple times. And Harry didn't bat an eye. Were those typos?
Freya chapter 8 . 5/31
oh shit ignore my last review

appearantly my web browser decided to act weird, I only just noticed that half of the page was missing. Reread chapter 7 now!
Freya chapter 8 . 5/31
GOOD STORY SO FAR, but a few inconsistencies in this chapter. Harry and Hermione have hardly had any contact with Hagrid so far and nothing was mentioned about a dragon yet, so this dialogue seems odd.

Also there was never a conversation between Harry and Hermione where they decided it was probably Voldemort going after the stone (probably a conversation that should've happened after they saw snape in the forbidden forest).

This chapter feels like you're trying to rush things all of a sudden without a decent basic outline.

Constructive critisism is the norm, please do not be offended (people usually are). I am simply trying to help.
Talon of 7 chapter 36 . 5/27
I laughed for a good five minutes when I realized that Emma Watson came up to Harry and Daniel Radcliffe came up to Hermione to ask them to dance. Great story. Love the plot and everything. I dont even mind how addicting it is.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/26
I really liked Brianna before this chapter but now I'm not so sure.
534667lc chapter 39 . 5/12
Loved your story , now favourited!
EllyYuki chapter 4 . 5/11
:D This fanfic makes my day. It's awesome. Sometimes I feel a bit sorry for Dumbledore though. :/
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