Reviews for Smile
PersephoneParkinson chapter 1 . 9/20/2016
This was very cute!
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
Cute. Keep writing
Lapse in Judgment chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Nice story. Quite good for a first foray... just nicely done in general. Normally I'd be more constructive than this, but I'm dead tired, and am leaving this review before I go to bed. I'm off to look at your other stuff now.

Camo-Bi-Jo chapter 1 . 5/30/2007
Very nice first although it could've been longer and I didn't feel the... intensity, the flame, if you will, or the passion that comes from love. Very nice first though
MyHeroRaven chapter 1 . 1/8/2007
ONCE AGAIN I LOVE IT! I do that to. If I finish a test early I will work on some fic. That is how I got my Teen Titans fic..."Dare" Hey if you like depressing and sad stuff I wrote a Harry Potter poem. It is quite sad. It is called, "Underneath It All" You should check it out!

-Raven out
dracolover18 chapter 1 . 1/4/2007
really good story-line

well written

i loved it

it was rather sad though

poor hermione

it was awesome though
Dying to be Different chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
Nice, but really short. Try longer chapters.
darkangledragonlover chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
Believe the Lie chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Impressive. I love your writing style.
xoxSasukexox chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
Lol I like this fic, even though it's short. It's pretty good, wish hermione would get a smil lol. If you ever make any other story please tell! You made a god fic. Lol thx
frenchfrylovesfred chapter 1 . 9/19/2006


keep writing