|Reviews for Hot and Bothered|
| Poison's Ivy chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
To this day this is still one of the sexiest stories I have ever read. And you managed to keep it classy too. Not sure how you figured out how to do that, but great job!
Yes, I did come back to read this. I do that from time to time; it is that good.
| Concolor44 chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Dead Like Me Unfiltered Awesome. One of the best series ever to air. Period.
Now, to the story:
It's November here. It's been pretty cold at night recently. We've broken out the slightly heavier covers and have taken to snuggling when we sleep, but we keep the window open to make sure we don't get too hot. You know how it is.
This story, though, could flip-flop the seasons by itself! It was like getting smacked across the face with a steaming hot towel just pulled from a sauna. I mean, damn. Now I DO need a shower. A cold one.
| Fidei Avi chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Where have I ever seen smut so well written? Goodness, shivers just went down my spine.
I enjoyed how you captured both characters. I think Raven, for a scene such as this was kept in character. Though I must say, her choice of music was unexpected. xD
My favorite part in particular was Raven oblivious to Robin being the room. I lol'd then contemplated on how incredibly hot the scene could be. Girl strips down, boy is confused then pleasantly surprised.
| Sheethkal Shahar chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
I haven't read really good smut in a really long time. Now I wish I had a boyfriend. Great job.
| TTRaven4Ever chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
funny, are yuo gonna continue this or just leave me hanging?
| ultra dragon chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
well now at least i am sure she wont hate the summer anymore...
| SylverEyes chapter 1 . 3/1/2008
Have I not reviewed this? -slaps self-
Gosh, lemme just say, I absolutely adore your style. The way you always give background on what's going on before you get to the meat is really interesting, because although the oneshot works without it, it gives it depth and some cool looks into the thoughts of the character, so that I really enjoy.
Also, the transition between that part, Robin's short POV and then when Raven walks into Robin's room is great. It didn't seem forced or anything, and it flowed extremely well, so I loved that too.
I would so pay to see someone animate that part where Raven turns around an meets Robin's eyes. I could totally imagine that so well in my head. Robin was so seductive here, I adored it, and Raven seemed like she was enjoying herself, although like she didn't exactly know what to do. Except for there at that end when she had a VERY Raven moment. XD
-cough- I'm just going to say something that has nothing to do with your writing -however- it kind of pisses me off that Robin allowed Raven to see his eyes. I mean, they're the best of friends (here they're more), he trusts her so much, and vice versa. But it's something that he always keeps to himself. I just couldn't see him taking off his mask for anyone. At least, not yet.
That said, I must tell you that I think Lust always makes for an interesting story, because Raven is so against Lust, but here you are turning it into something believable and very hot.
I still can't believe I haven't reviewed this before! -contemplates shooting self but decides against it- Then I won't be able to read anything else that you might come up with! ;)
| Plagioclase chapter 1 . 1/1/2008
Haha! I like this one. Though, I'm a bit disappointed he never got her bra off. That was a joke by the way. You have a really good grasp of both characters, but especially Raven. She was honestly my favorite characters from the series. Keep on writing.
| Chi Yagami chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
you have such excellent raerob fics.
| Virg chapter 1 . 11/6/2007
ah! no! the ending! is.. too.. soon.. dying.. of. suspense.. crying.. from.. joy! such a HOT story! get it? HOT! ROFL! Oh MAN you're a great writer!
| Streets of Fire chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Lordy, that's all I have to say. *fans herself*
| Da unofficial Who chapter 1 . 10/25/2007
Ooh, I liked that, but I wish the lemon woulda been longer..
| dragonprincess1988 chapter 1 . 9/3/2007
nice look into raven's or lust's mind
| Namuro chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
As a Rob/Rae fan I'm on a constant search for decent fictions of them, and when I came across your story...excellent I say, really, really excellent.
I love how you did the introduction into Raven's dislike of the heatwave which led to other events and finally to the main section of the story. The choice of words and the description throughout were brilliant and made the story flow smoothly as well as fun to read.
The most funny part for me has got to be when Raven waltzed into Robin's room unaware of him on the bed as he crept up on her.
The best part though was the lime part which was a joy to read, the way you portrait the situation, the way you had Robin acted, the way you had Raven reacted...they were nicely done.
For most lime fictions I read, they tend to share a lot of similarities or that they are pretty much the same (as in the sudden bed action which is enjoyable to read but it offers nothing new in the originality). Which is why yours is my personal favorite, first off it was the different attitude that both the characters had towards their...u-hem *HOT* involvement, the change of scenery which was against the bathroom door and inside the bathroom a little just at the end...leaving the rest to the imagination and the lime action itself which was purely teasing and foreplay back and forth between Robin and Raven...mostly Robin. The foreplay was amusing, funny and enticing altogether with explicit details given.
Great work! Both you and your story go straight to my favorite lists! And I see that you have written many more of Rob/Rae stories to which I'll be checking all of them out!
| you-neek chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
i have a friend. An author friend who supports RobRae fully. Personally i support BBRae, and loath the birdie pairing just to tick him off. I really actually think it works, and think they go good together. I love you're style of writing, and the fact that there is no corny-ness in it is a total bonus.
I'm always getting tired of haveng to sift through the hormonal teenage girl fanfictions who think that since they can follow the typical plot of 'I totally likes this girl [who is really you] and I wonder how i could let her know i like her[so later when you leave the room almost crying because you want me to say that to YOU, i can confess the whole thing and we all live happily ever after like that]'. Or the ones where suddenly one random day, in a random setting, her powers are under her control and instead of wondering wtf? like she should be, she runs off to her knight in shimmering spandex and confesses her just festered love and somehow he loves her back.
Anyways, i'm ranting and i just wanted to let you know that i love your work, and i have seen Eureka, AND Dead Like Me [every episode, my brother owns the box set of season one and two]
p.s. did you know Rube and Georgias father [well the actors] were doing cholesteral medication ads after it cancelled?
p.p.s. did you know the actor for Daisy Edair was on an episode of C.S.I?
p.p.p.s. sorry if i'm being too long winded