Reviews for Hindsight |
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![]() ![]() Nice read |
![]() ![]() That was delightful! I wasn't expecting a romp from a story of Snape going back in time to change things, but that's what it felt like. Pettigrew being revealed by Remus showing and and noticing recognizing Scabber as Wormtailo was very clever, Harry constantly showing up in SNape's rooms to demand time with HIS Professor, the altered mark was just brilliant, and I really enjoyed the founders' portraits at the end. (Of course Snape would hex the portrait in his room. Of course he would.) Thank you for the fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() SQWEEEEEEEE! OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Bwahahahaaa! Dumbldork basically dug his own grave with his paranoid ranting. XD Hilarious! And Severus and Harry mentor/student was adorable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very entertaining! |
![]() ![]() Great story, well done |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazing story, it very brief, but that just makes it more enjoyable. However, what I liked best is the fact that you managed to keep Harry a child, which is what he should have been. Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this fic a lot. |
![]() ![]() DON'T THINK I DIDN'T CATCH THAT CHAPTER TITLE PUN. (It was absolutely amazing tbh) Also, I love how this is how it actually could have been if snape was a little less pigheaded |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is definitely one of my favorite Loralee stories, right up there with The Weasley Plot. Of course, I haven't read all of them... yet. As always, thank you for sharing your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your kinder, gentler Severus Snape. Unfortunately he is really ooc. I wish canon Snape was not such a total berk. As always a well thought-out story with interesting twists. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. (Both you and your characters who hit Albus over the head with the truth.) A lot of vicarious satisfaction is produced when fans who have wished that they could give that old man a 'dope slap' get to read it in your story. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Word Nerd again: discrete: individually separate and distinct. discreet: careful and circumspect in ones words or actions. (As Poppy must be to scan Quirrel to see why he's acting strange... if it worked.) Liking this story, too! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh man i wish there was more, i loved your harry in this one :) |