Reviews for The Mathias Prophecy
Mukuro234 chapter 10 . 6/15
XD this is an awsome part one
laexdream chapter 6 . 5/2
Kyahhh. What is with this older men reverse harem? I love it. LOLLLL I really do. So I'm NOT crazy, and the vibes I've been feeling haven't been made up. Right? ...Right?
laexdream chapter 5 . 5/2
The Prophecy must have been hard to write, considering you needed it to rhyme and stuff... What I would reccommend, would be that since this is such a long piece (although any poem sort of should have this), you should add in proper punctuation. Cause honestly, I simple skipped through it. I read things like how I would say them. So this poem was kind of hard for me to read.
laexdream chapter 4 . 5/2
I love the fact that girl Harry is still named Harry. A lot of stories change her name, or try a girl version of the original, but keeping it as Harry seems more... I don't know... Simple and clean? I like it. And the gifts for everyone - the scene where Harry was buying the chocolate for Ron made me laugh. Your ideas of the gifts that Harry might buy for her friends were really thoughtful - I would have never pegged Hermione for a trashy romance reader, but from past experiences, she could totally be. I also enjoyed the interactions between Harry and Snape. They were really heartwarming. I love your story. And the whole dementors thing should've been a part of the actual book. That is, Dumbledore refusing to allow Dementors at school in the first place.
Either the romance is brewing, or I simply see it everywhere... Am I going crazy or what?
laexdream chapter 2 . 5/2
I really like everyone's dynamic with each other. Man, this story is really good. I love it. Is it me, or is there some brewing chemistry between some people? Or maybe I'm just totally thinking too much...
waybetterthanyou chapter 5 . 2/19
Lily Carmen Black chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Very funny.
sailormoonserenity99 chapter 10 . 10/13/2014
Finished part 1. The other 2 parts sound very exciting and I can't wait to read them!

I wonder how Severus will be in future chapters.
sailormoonserenity99 chapter 8 . 10/12/2014
Harry's conversation with her father made me cry. It would have been devastating for her to just stay there and not intefere.
Spyro the demonic wolf chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
I'm sorry buy I dont really like how you kept her name as harry it just doesn't fit anymore. :3
delete-account-please 5149757 chapter 10 . 1/4/2014
This was an excellent story off to read The Mathias Prophecy Book II.
delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 10 . 1/1/2014
This was a good story off to read The Mathias Prophecy Book II.
Katherine - Child of Dreams chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
You misspelled 'Patronus' in the Prophecy.
TheLadyJaye chapter 1 . 3/16/2013
It would have been nice to know this was a female!Harry before I started reading this crap. Ugh...stupid...
lilmisadiva chapter 6 . 12/24/2012
aw she slapped him wow
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