Reviews for First Step
TigremiLion chapter 1 . 5/18/2015
Wow, that was intense and somehow I was getting a cruel vibe off John by the end of it not that I never did before or that I'm his fan. But you got him just right at least if he was like that it would explain why Dean turned out the way he did.
ItsAHopeForAllTheHopeless chapter 1 . 5/1/2015
Loved it thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
Made me cry!
majorshane chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Realy touching! Brava!
00-night-eyes-00 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
love it would love to read more wee-school ones.
nickiandlogan chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
:) love it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
XD I read the author's note. I liked your simile about writing the story. I find it hard to believe though, because it's very well written. Very good job Could you please make a sequel? Still in the teacher's point of view about how Dean is in class? I think you'd do it justice. Anyway, I greatly enjoyed your story and I'll be sure to check out your others :)

- Crys
zekeschance chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
I just found this story and found it very compelling. I really liked it from the teacher's POV. I understood exactly what you were trying to say and I could picture the whole scene. Thank you.
fearlessgoddess2 chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Fascinating and very, very good. Heavy. :)
x-fuse2 chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Great story, sad and beautiful.
Dutch92 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Very awesome! I think it works perfectly this POV. I hope there's more to the story!
KariHermione chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
So sad makes me just wan to hug little dean! I loved how it was the teacher's POV.
Angelbyname chapter 1 . 11/7/2007
God , really loved the angst fest from an outside view!
Turquoise Girl chapter 1 . 3/16/2007
An interesting POV you wrote. I can well imagine that this could have happened. You were right to settle upon this teacher's view. I enjoyed the description of John's character in the teacher's eyes. I particularly liked the ending, the last five sentences. They were very...real? I can't think of the word, but that is what comes to mind.

Dugleik chapter 1 . 12/17/2006
Yes, the POV monster. I like the story.
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