|Reviews for The Window|
| Sak chapter 12 . 12/11/2019
Great movement through all the emotions!
| Sak chapter 9 . 12/11/2019
They're flirting so much it is amazing
| Sak chapter 7 . 12/11/2019
Don't let us forget he's a pervert
| Sak chapter 6 . 12/11/2019
Poor sakura with her broken home
| Sak chapter 5 . 12/11/2019
Heh, I need me a thong like Sakuras
But who is Ino dating?
| Sak chapter 4 . 12/11/2019
Talking openly about sex with a sexy teacher whom you've seen having sex is just a bit awkward for me.
But hey those kinda throwing lessons that need physical correction are too good
| Sak chapter 3 . 12/11/2019
He actually was getting piano lessons.
| Sak chapter 2 . 12/11/2019
Omg so frustrating when your so close but your man goes over the edge and leaves you hanging. How dare he dump her.
Who is Ino going out with?
| Sak chapter 1 . 12/11/2019
The horror and embarrassment and just FEELS that occurs when catching someone IN THE ACT was represented perfectly here
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/17/2019
it was good...until this chapter. i rather have a violent Sakura than a doormat
| KnellaLuna chapter 13 . 11/5/2019
Man I like this story, but you make Sakura seem so weak...
| Lila Dunmare chapter 21 . 10/26/2019
Wow, rollercoaster of emotions, thanks for this fanfiction !
| magicarnival chapter 1 . 10/15/2019
I ended up liking this more than I expected! I admit I wasn't too keen on the original premise of "seeing Kakashi in a sexual manner and poor repressed Sakura who's never had an orgasm starts getting interested" but you wrote it well and I liked how the relationship developed. I admit that I was worried you were actually going to make her pregnant considering how common that is in your other works LOL. But I'm glad she wasn't in the end, since I don't think it would've been healthy for the relationship's growth. As always, loved your work! I hope one day you might be inspired to finish some of your other stories or even write new KakaSaku again!
| pearslandpendant chapter 1 . 10/8/2019
So... I finished this after a sleepless weekend and I must say, wow, YOUR WRITING IS SO GOOD. You know why?
I got invested in this fic thinking how fun is Kakashi and Sakura flirting around, but boy I have too many issues:
- super doormat Sakura
- Kakashi with the itch, who at first can't keep his dirty talking off because he's a pervert
- Naruto's reaction (I wanted to strangle him!)
- Ino is such a bitch
- Sakura's family and boyfriends
- the whole getting caught, getting shamed, and their punishments.
I know it's important to the plot, everything that happened, but it's a struggle for me to read Kakashi getting treated like that, especially that in canon he's like a god, he's the Rokudaime, and here he was treated as a...sex predator and pedo. MY POOR KAKASHI!
But hey, your writing is so gripping I went through and finished til the end, though I can't say I wasn't left unbothered by everything that happened. You did a great job putting someone who's on a pedestal canonically, left to be a flawed, lonely outcast. But hey, he's very human and very in love near the end.
I love their ending... Sigh. Good for Sakura, getting what she worked hard for! I'm happy for them.
| 50blades chapter 9 . 10/7/2019
"Seeing as how you stole the majority of your moves, I don't see where you get off being so stingy about hoarding them all to yourTheir banter has me rolling.
I know writing fight screens can be challenging. I enjoyed Sakura fighting the bandits. The description was clear and I felt I could picture what was happened.
I can't wait for Sakura's training to begin. Thank you for this chapter.