Three hours, fifty four minutes and forty six seconds later…

The Dark Lord's hand was twitching. That was not a good sign. But Stephen couldn't help it if the bloody feather didn't want to float now, could he? For the past three hours and Merlin knew how many minutes

Oh my god. Never thought I would be meet you. It's so nice to meet you Merlin. Never knew you had a habit of writing Harry Potter fanfiction. You simply must tell me more about your mysterious and magical life. I've got so many questions!

- your most faithful (don't worry I won't tell anybody your secret ;)

I felt you might need this: m. raisingchildren. net. au/articles/language_development_2_to_3_

Sorry, had to split it up to allow it posting, just draw the spaces together. But yiur story benefits from being a bit more accurate.

Ha ha I'm guessing immediately when d boy appeared we all knew he was Harry/Stephan's teacher.
Btw great starting, usually in fics like these they don't show the part where Harry is learning or if he does it's usually with crazy insane Bellatrix, who anybody is sane (none if the dark) would not have a child be thaught by her. Then there is paranoid, only siding with himself Severus, and then Voldie himself. Seriously, Voldie with a child just beginning to use a wand. Does anybody see the consequences? So anyway I'm rambling, love ur fic and please even though I know life will get in ur way can u try to update.

Is it bad that ever since Francis was introduced I've loathed him?

I think Tenebris Princeps is a better translation of Dark Prince.

It is always funny to read about Harry or Stephen calling the Dark Lord Thran.

I think after that profecy i would definitely kill harry, i mean i depend on the decision of a brat, no way i force my destiny... Voldemort dont like restritions.

Please don't delete this! This is one of my favourite stories of all time!

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DON'T DELETE DON'T DELETE
AWESOME STORY NO WORDS CAN DESCRIBE HOW AWESOME IT IS

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

A Mary Sue is someone who is spectacular at everything, is nice to everyone. They are so perfect that it's annoying and everyone ends up hating them

hurry up and update please!

Filler chapters. Meh. A necessary evil.

Is Severus going to be a problem? I like Severus, but sometimes he lets his grudges get in the way and I just cant sympathize with him.