|Reviews for Queen of Omashu|
| The Calling chapter 2 . 1/12
I can't wai read more
| The Calling chapter 1 . 1/12
Great chapter :)
| elizabethbane chapter 12 . 11/28/2014
Toko, there's no choice now.
| AngelicalMistique chapter 15 . 12/20/2012
Brilliant story! Loved it, but don't think I would have ever found it on my own, cause this is the first Zuko x Toph story I read... Not my favorite pairing, but you made it work nicely!
| Desired Dreams-XS8018 chapter 12 . 12/6/2009
Option 2: Toko and Maieo.!
| scarlet luchia chapter 16 . 4/13/2009
this was very good, i think toph and bummi should have gotten together tjough.
i realy wish you didnt add in secrrets of the water tribe though.
very good story in general!
| ViolotQ chapter 15 . 9/12/2008
'laughs' terra is an earthbender. i was bored & that episode was on, & ive seen it b4, but i was immiadiatly like, whoa! shes a fricken earthbender! toko! yay! i heart toko! the thing with teo being mais love slave was hilarious! but i cant imagine that ship. mais all, life sucks & then u die. & teos like, yay! stick that in ur juicebox & SUCK! alright, that was random...
| denytheworld chapter 15 . 8/31/2008
Well, this is an old story of yours and hopefully your writing had improved. When I read this through, it's extremely humourous, and that's good, but I don't see much interaction between Toph and Zuko for them to hook up just yet. It was hard to follow (
| erno chapter 14 . 7/22/2008
This was ridiculous and poorly written and it was way to oriented around the erotic to be K. Any fanfiction that has the words 'nether regions' and involve a 14 year old boy bending a watery dildo for his 16 year old girlfriend should be labeled M.
| TOKA FAN chapter 12 . 7/2/2008
Option 2 TOKA
| BaybieItsJess chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
I didn't start reading yet but is Terra and BB really in here? LOL.
| irohsteashoppegirls chapter 15 . 1/18/2007
Pretty odd story but I really liked it. I'm glad that even Bumi won that he didn't wed Toph. Herbalist is perfect mate for Bumi since the age span isn't greater than 100 years.
| blindbandit29 chapter 1 . 1/11/2007
WOW! i so love it this is one of my fav stories not only beaucse it was great but i love the whole Toko bit.
great job never stop writing!11
| David chapter 15 . 1/6/2007
You should write a sequal to Queen of Omashu.
| Cela chapter 15 . 12/29/2006
Hey thanks for writing a Toko that was more than 2 chapps. I LOVED IT! but i think it needed a little more detail ya know? and next time make it all TOKO :) :) :) smiles and huggles