Reviews for Bad Guys Playground
AnnariLove chapter 24 . 11/12
Yah! Yah! Yah! WonderfulI see! it's so lovely. Nice work.
AnnariLove chapter 1 . 11/8
Sorry, I couldn't help it. You've got Sasuke's parent's names wrong. Their real names are Uchiha Fugaku and Uchiha Mikoto (or so I've heard, most people use those names so they should be the real names). Try gathering information if you don't know something, it confuses some people who do know, can be really useful yah know! Bye.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10
This is a porno for girls
Vykki Q chapter 7 . 5/23
Sasukes a goof sometimes lmao I love this
Vykki Q chapter 1 . 5/22
Well hell ya lol this is awesome
Guest chapter 6 . 4/14
Awesome chapters as always
Guest chapter 24 . 4/2
SapphireKageKyuura chapter 1 . 3/24
What is it with people making Naruto a damned slave of some sort? I think someone should turn the tables on Sasuke and make him the slave. *grins*
Anon chapter 1 . 1/8
Ugh, I just can't continue reading this due to bad sentence structure and grammar. This thing is like written by a 12 year old kid with C's in English.

The story is all over the place and there is no depth to the characters at all.
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 12/9/2014
Hm...can't wait to see, where this story is leading to :)

Sasuke seems very bipolar. Is this only pretense? Like is he feeling obligated to punish Naruto for insulting him as example?
RunningPlanets chapter 9 . 10/26/2014
I know I'm like super late for this but this feels like I'm reading a yaoi version of Boys Over Flowers xD
ahhhh cute chapter 24 . 7/16/2014
This was so adorable! It was a great way to pass time! Loved it so much. I haven't had a great fan fiction like this in such a long time. I especially enjoyed how Sasuke was such a pervert haha! The ending was sweet and you did a great job on the story! I like how there's not too much angst in this story. Just a fair amount to not frustrate the reader... I hate fictions that are so angst-y that it's practically considered emo. Gahh getting off topic but, if I were to give you a rating on this fiction it definitely deserves a 9.8/10
I didn't really give a full score because there were a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes in some chapters. I still remember when you typed: "Naruto chucked and snuggled into Naruto's neck." That confused me a bit
hmmm chapter 4 . 7/13/2014
So far I have just finished reading chapter 4 and I just have five complaints. Other than that, I like the story plot.
1) I don't like how OOC Sasuke and Naruto are. It's just like taking the character's appearance and name then changing them to a whole new person.
2) I don't like how they instantly like each other without anything happening in between them to MAKE them like each other. Didn't you say Naruto was the straightest gay man ever?
3) You need to check over your chapters. Some sentences didn't make sense at all! But, I could make out what you're trying to say or make them say. You still need to edit the chapters though.
4) I know I'm only on chapter 4 but, you need more background for Sasuke and Naruto! But, I have a feeling you will explain more about them and their families. So I'm patiently waiting for that moment to shine.
5) Okay so, entering my nerd side... and this should kind of be common sense: Naruto said that he didn't want to move in and live with his "aunt and uncle" because he didn't want to cause them any trouble since they were new couple. But, why would he do that when he could just move in with them and not bother them? Everyone would want to move in with someone they're close to instead of moving in with strangers and getting used by them for cooking, fucking, cleaning, anything, you name it.
Mmhh, these were my 5 complaints. Then again, I love your story line! :'3
Liza La Killa chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
You're right, summary does suck, but you kept your promise and I just want to kiss you! -3- That was probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read. No lie! I laughed, I cried, and oh the nosebleed! Dear god, I think I went into a coma due to blood loss. I only wish the sensation could've lasted longer. Like 300k would have been nice, but oh well. Haha. Anyways, thank you for hospitalizing me and the tears of joy/sadness. I LOVE YOU!

Wright on!
\(0)/ *punches air*
Tsukihime1991 chapter 24 . 6/23/2014
Awwes i liked this story alot i loved the lemons
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