|Reviews for Looks Like Loss|
| Book girl fan chapter 6 . 3/10
OK, I totally loved the 'Man Code Book' moment.
| Shazza chapter 8 . 9/4/2013
I loved the whole "senses " orientation" of your first 5 fics. Your plot lines are very unique, and very well drawn out. It will be a gift to read your next mini series of the geometrical angle in the titled of stories. I have not commented yet on the characters of Dean and Sam, they have been to good to stop reading to chat. But I want you know that the boys could not be drawn more artfully. The brothers banter, their snappy dialogue, the one liners so good. Plus the amazing amount of planning to incorporate Deans leg injuries in a group of stories, just to get some payout 5 fics later. I swear that is way more planning than the show runners have going on now ( but I am just a bit unnerved by the lack finesse given the last few seasons. And yet here I am psyched for season 9. In flippen oct.)
To end on a good note, You Rock!
| zeroichi chapter 8 . 1/4/2013
Dude! Seriously.. Can u stop amazed me? All of ur story is damn awesome! Funny, heartbreaking sometime but they r all damn awesome! Ur gonna be in my fav author list :)) plz do continue writting. Ur idea is brilliant :))
| Zinfer chapter 8 . 2/27/2012
Great stuff, I'm kinda a big fan of the civil-war centric spn fics, and as usual, im a hurtDean fan. Good stuff :)
| 7kstar chapter 8 . 1/24/2010
cute story, and I especially liked Sam teasing poor Dean about naming his weapon. But it looks like Sam has a new mission to discover the name of his brother's car.
How I wish we could have simpler times. Because the show has always worked best when the brothers were working together and giving each other a little bit of hard times.
| fearlessgoddess2 chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
“Martha, the ghostbusters are here!” Lol! Great!
| bhoney chapter 8 . 4/5/2008
Ack! I'm so sad that this set of stories is over. But, thankfully, you have some more for me to read. :)
Wow, great setup. What a challenge-a house with so many ghosts. I have to admit, I was a little stumped as to how Sam and Dean were going to take care of things. Really well done.
I was cracking up with Dean's continued references to "Gone with the Wind". I wouldn't have thought that was a movie he'd have seen. LOL
Awesome banter, as usual. Some of my favorite lines:
“Were you already sleeping armed to the teeth when you were five?” “Some kids got training wheels… I got a .22. Santa feared me. That’s why he stopped coming.” ROTFL And: “We’re men. We don’t talk. Except Dr. Phil. That dude can talk ‘til the cows come home.” And this: “You know how this works. I get in too deep, cause you lots of grief and then we fix it. Why change a perfectly good system?” And: “A guy can’t protect random pregnant ghost chicks now?” Great lines!
But this was my favorite: “What part of ‘I’m fine’ don’t you get? It’s guy speak for ‘I might be dying’.” “Sorry. Forgot my Man Code Book there for a second.” ROTFL!
Wow, that first ghost encounter was so creepy, the soldier touching Dean. That played out in really unexpected ways throughout the story, with it tying him to the land-really imaginative. I was cracking up at the payoff for the continued leg pain-they got the wrong leg this time! :)
And then the ghost shooting Sam-this really surprised me. I'm not sure if we've seen this on the show before, ghostly weapons harming the boys. I know we've seen ghosts themselves harm them, but usually in other ways. I'll have to think about this. I remember you did it in the last story (Trophies) too, with the hunting rifle and knife.
I was a little annoyed with the Sheriff at first, the way he kept implying Dean was dumb, and giving them such a hard time. I liked him by the end though, and he really had a great idea, with the way he got rid of the ghosts. Good job giving him depth.
I LOVED Sam's reactions when Dean was in pain, especially at the hospital. And by the way, telling us that Dean has gangrene and then ending the chapter-you don't call that a cliffhanger? LOL I've said it before-I'm glad I only read them once they're finished. :) I was hollaring at my screen when Dean got taken as a POW. LOL
I was completely cracking up at Dean's reaction to Geoff showing up with Marigold. I couldn't stop laughing.
Oh, but then Dean's interaction with the pregnant woman-so heartbreaking. He cried! :( Glad Sam heard the whole thing. And of course, Dean had to shrug it off with: “Dude, I’m not sure at what point we became ghost shrinks, but this is really starting to annoy me.” :) That's our Dean.
And finally-the end. I LOVED that Sam knew about Marigold. I've been waiting for that. And Dean's reaction to him knowing was priceless! ROTFL Loved their exchange in the last chapter.
Oh-and I hope you're going to tell us the car's name. Pretty please! And I'd love to see them go to Disneyland. I'm sure they'd find some kind of creature that needed killing, and it would be hilarious.
Sorry this is so long. I blame you, for writing such a great story! :) I'm adding you to my Favoite Authors list.
| frenchfredo chapter 8 . 1/1/2008
another nice one! And this, "That chick was kinda like Scarlett on acid", HEHEHE
| frenchfredo chapter 7 . 1/1/2008
“A guy can’t protect random pregnant ghost chicks now?” LMFAO
| frenchfredo chapter 4 . 1/1/2008
well, thank you very much for the image of Dean rotting...
| Dark-flames chapter 8 . 1/1/2008
Oh I've really gotta stop this, must get productive already... This stuff, just not heatlyh *pouts* oKay fine, just one more story...
"“Good idea,” Sam said and started laughing again. “I’m sure Marigold will love it. She can play with the rest of the kiddies.”"
Gah.. No really, stop writing this stuff so well!
| Jemnezmy chapter 8 . 9/9/2007
This chapter was so funny!
*insane uncontrollable laughter*
Enjoyed the story and definately the end!
| loriimonsterr chapter 8 . 8/3/2007
great story. i regret the lack of hurt (my guilty pleasure in sn fics) but greatly appreciate the bit offered. i really like the way you desribe action scenes. very nice.
and the brother banter?
| loriimonsterr chapter 4 . 8/3/2007
i was going to hold off on reviewing until the end on this one (being completed quite a while ago and all) but couldnt stand it. gangrene!
oh you are an evil, evil one.
i like it.
| kwater chapter 8 . 7/12/2007
Loved it, really great story.. Thanks for the read - K