Reviews for Every Breath
Canadawear chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
im crying. I love seeing Momo on the path to recovery and Toshiro handling it amazingly.
Aronim chapter 2 . 7/24/2013
Haha, this was fun, even if Hinamori seems very bold to me. Good work.
MeBellis chapter 2 . 4/10/2011
This... is a very old story. I... don't particularly care. Because it was amazing. Very, very amazing. And the most strangest thing of all? I don't even like Hitsuhina. In fact, it's one of my least favourite pairings. But this, this brilliance, is AWESOME. They're so in character and the dialogue was so good and it's so weird that I'm fawning over something I normally wouldn't even look at but jhflgnahirvnkghileksnr.

Matsumoto was my favourite.
Le Requiem chapter 2 . 3/16/2011
LOVE IT
Le Requiem chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
LOVED IT
hitsuhinarenrukiichihime4ever chapter 2 . 1/13/2011
Great hitsuhina work! Please update- Sort of a cliff hanger. Love it!
Megilien chapter 2 . 12/21/2010
Aww,man, what I wouldn't give for a new HitsuHina fic written by you...you're seriously one of the Top 3 HitsuHina fanfic writers I've come across, and it's such a darn shame there are only 2 of them so far:-s...

Anyway, my point was that -in case you couldn't already tell- I simply adored this fanfic. You've kept everyone in character (and I should know, since I'm terribly, terribly critical and picky when it comes to IC portrayals, ESPECIALLY when they're about my favourite characters -which Toushirou is- /pairings -yup, that would be HitsuHina:)) -etc. - So glad you incorporated Hyourinmaru into this- you've given him another layer of awesome with that sarcastic, teasing humour, and his delightful banter with Toushirou XD . Plus, yay for sweet, mischievous Hinamori and teasing, big-sister-esque Matsumoto!:D

In conclusion- thank you for this wonderful fanfic. I bow to your powers of awesome in all HitsuHina-things related! :D
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 2 . 1/7/2010
The story was sweet and thought-provoking; I am still amazed that this author manages to so perfectly depict someone (Hitsugaya) we don't actually see much of in the manga. And in the omake Matsumoto, clearly standing in as the author's impish side, is perfectly ... impish, even as she drives Hitsugaya to be ever more perfectly Hitsugaya. Bonus line of dialogue: "Boobs off the desk"!
Angelwings228 chapter 2 . 12/22/2009
really funny. This is exactly what Rangiku would do to Toshiro. :D
persephonesfolly chapter 2 . 7/30/2009
Lovely story!

You really nailed Hitsugaya's character and I enjoyed the unexpectedness of the kiss. Matsumoto was just like an evil older sister intent on provoking a love-struck younger brother. Nicely done.
adsjkfhk chapter 2 . 6/12/2009
omagod! i love this story! matsumoto was funny. "boobs off the desk" LOL
unformidable trust chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
lol, matsumoto is hilarious

great story
lil-c-girl2218 chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
AW that was cute. Surprised Hitsugaya is funny. So is embarrassed Hitsugaya. And so is perverted Hitsugaya, ahaha. Very cute story!
TrinityAngelX chapter 2 . 10/27/2008
LMFAO, simply perfect :)
Momo the DUGONG chapter 1 . 9/18/2008
HOW CUTE! Anyway, Momo's birthday is in june just to let you know! HEHHEHEHEHEHEEHHEHEE! (June the third)!

Love,

Momo-chan
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