|Reviews for Genin of The Leaf|
| anonyme chapter 6 . 4/3/2012
why is naruto so weak?
| dimriver chapter 21 . 12/3/2011
Nice story. I liked it.
Oh and you did your math wrong.
1000 clones, would mean 1000 times any length, so if going by months, 1000 months in one month. 1000/12 gives 83 and 1/3 equivalent years per month.
| Lord of the Disc chapter 10 . 10/15/2011
Your story has a good concept, but I found it tough to read. The way that you describe or explain things results in a lack of understanding in what just happened. The sentences just do not flow well and I found them tough to follow. I would love to see this rewritten and improved upon.
| Raethor chapter 16 . 3/4/2011
... ive noticed that in many naruto stories the hokage forgets that they are ninjas. If she wants Danzo dead she should go to an Anbu and tell them to bring his head...
| Raethor chapter 9 . 3/4/2011
i noticed your math was off
1000 clones a day means 1000 times the training in one day
1 month has 30 days
30*100130,000 days worth of training in one month
there are 365 days in a year
30,000/36582 years 49 days worth of training
| Raethor chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
im wondering why naruto passed out from blood loss, he has almost regenerative healing...
and why is he so weak, he can keep up with kakashi when he had his sharingan out and he's spent the past 2 1/2 years getting training from a sannin but he gets injured enough to pass out from blood loss from one mid-level peon from sound?
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/15/2010
I don't know what it is, but there's something about your writing that I just don't like. The ooc I can undersstand on certain characters, but there aren't any breaks in the paragraphs so the sheer amount of words in each chapter makes this really hard to read. By the end of the chapter, there just seems to be so much junk and actually maybe 75 percent of what unread actually seems like plotline.
One tubing I'm finding weird is the way you have Gaara talk. If indidnt know any better, I'd say he was some king from midevil times. That and he'd never use the suffix kun with naruto. And naruto would never use a suffix on him either, unless maybe san when he would be trying to keep up appearances.
I know you aren't going to change it, but I still had to say it
| Hotstreak's crossover stories chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
| shelwyn chapter 21 . 2/28/2010
Oh god chunnin of the leaf is so short :
| shelwyn chapter 20 . 2/28/2010
That was a short and eh...
There was so much build up that it seems ...
not bad but unsatisfying.
sorry i can't spell.
| shelwyn chapter 19 . 2/28/2010
"Yes, Lord Mizukage, he did very well, considering she is a Jinchuuriki!"
Everyone saw this coming lol
| shelwyn chapter 18 . 2/28/2010
It was alright, I started to get a bit bored.
| shelwyn chapter 17 . 2/28/2010
Why would anyone remember that?
| shelwyn chapter 16 . 2/28/2010
That was a very nice attack you put into the story.
| shelwyn chapter 15 . 2/26/2010
I think you should add a little more detail.
I know this is a fic and you can do whatever you want, but eh, most of naruto's friends know he has a demon and all that. Its an old fic so its forgiven :P