Reviews for Click
chocolate lover 4ever chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
...click...

I think you did an excellent job. Ive always been a strange fan of darkness, and this is exactly how i'd imagine Axel if he ever went insane. So yeah. And i dont wanna go away! To good of a story! Sooooooooo... yeah.

...click...

*EXPLODES INTO COTTON CANDY*
Heaven's Demon chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
I understood the 'click'ing. good job!
Kiryami chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
But I dun wanna go away. D;

jk lol

I like the abstractness. And I get what you're saying about Axel's state of mind, and the "we can't be" thing...

Sorry. I have difficulty explaining what I feel. x_x

Either way, this is really good. Keep up the great work, nee? x3
Beansxx chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Well, I understood it completely without the explanation, but thanks anyway. :3

'T was...interesting, I'll give it that.
inactiveGE chapter 1 . 8/10/2007
I kind of thought he was trying to do this in the actual game, if Roxas hadn't beaten him. And in the end, they both, symbolically, died. Very nice short, Axel's character is beautiful to play with.
sorasgirl0 chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
what a let down
mimikooya chapter 1 . 1/14/2007
I think it's very interesting how he kills himself and Roxas. He seems really dangerous like that which makes it very in character.
BisquickBismarck chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
it began well enough, i enjoyed the interruptions of "CLICK" and life, but the "dream" ending just squicked me wrong.

i really do wish that it had been reality and that roxas had been burned to death.

or axel.

which ever.

honestly, this would have been a very complete and interesting read if not for the high-school AU.

happy pencils:

BiZ
Seshennu chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
I have mixed feelings about this..

To start, I'd like to say that it was -very- easy to visualize. The style fit with what you were going for so well, it was like I was watching this story, rather than reading it.

However... The "it was just a dream" thing sort of took away from the story. On the other hand, that last sentence was a bit of a killer, and seemed to almost undo it all, leaving room for what was fake to become a reality...

So, yeah. Don't get me wrong, I adore this piece. It's -wonderful-. Just that one point that sort of got to me. (shrug) Okay, now I'm rambling. In short, great work, thanks for sharing. :)
SpiralUchiha chapter 1 . 10/11/2006
*giggle* funny, at least to me. Good job! *goes to re read it
Empty Melody chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
oO0O0o That was hot -sorry, bad pun-

;]
Looshk chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
i get it, its cool... kinda romantic, in a fucked up sense...

probably something id do...

If we cant be together in life, then we shall die together...

Romeo and juliet stylee always good.
Hidden Guardian chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
I just read this story aloud to my roommate...

I think she died.

In the good way - laughing and all.

I am thoroughly amused.

Thank you!