Reviews for Broken
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/2/2007
Awsome story! The ending was done really well! You are a really good writer.
nwfairy chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
That was beautiful... *sniff*
Miran Anders chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
A very solemn tone, overlaid beautifully with John's notice of the shifting light, the patterns of their enviorment, as it were, being laid over their lives... great imagery, subtle and well written.

Sad.

I read that you are a writer too (out in the real world, that is - I know the feeling), and must say that even though this is a 'SGA' fic, it really feels like something original... I'm not sure how to explain that sentence. The characters aren't exactly out of character, and the situation is certainly real for the canon - but it feels like with a few minor changes you could be writing your own universe here.

Best of luck to you, and thanks - Miran
Sepik chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Hm. It was interesting, although kind of boring. I loved the comparison with shards of light...
Titan5 chapter 1 . 9/21/2006
Excellent look at the problems now rearing their ugly heads. I love the way Sheppard's observations of the light was interspersed throughout the scene, giving the whole thing an even more emotional twist.