Reviews for Man on the Side
LadyRivers chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
I read this fic a year ago. I have reread several times. I loved Carlos and Ashley and twisted so much so that they became a couple. Your fic is the best story I've read about both. Congratulations!
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Aw, poor Carlos. Great job though. Catch ya on the flip side.
nicole14 chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
Wow. That was awesome writing. And like one of the previous comments mentioned, it was done very realistically. You could feel Carlos' emotions with each sentence. Great job. I really hope you do more.
Psycho Tangerine chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
Good story. Carlos did get shoved aside very quickly in favor of Andros.
Hagar chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
I like this one.

Very, very realistic - having been part of such dramas in RL, I can relate to the way you're presenting both of your characters. I also like how you kept it 'minor', not pumping up the volume on drama/emotion, just portraying something very humane and real.

Up on my favorite list it goes.

See You Around,

Hagar
SweetSas chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
I just discoverd this, I love it so much! Ashley and Carlos are cute together! Write more about them please! :) And check out my Ashley/Carlos fic in my profile! :)

Love Sasja
garnetred chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Excellent story. Love the song. Please write soon.
Star Fata chapter 1 . 9/22/2006
Great job.
CoolDiva chapter 1 . 9/20/2006
Very, very good. Deep. Seriously powerful. I agree about Carlos. Great job. Cya.

Diva ;)