|Reviews for Raspberry Jam|
| richon chapter 14 . 3/9
this story is awesome I had a great time reading it again for the second time thank you !
| Silvanesti chapter 15 . 3/8
A really interesting and well written story. I've enjoyed it and its many ideas, but I found some of the changes in the characters, or Harry' s changed opinion of them, a bit disturbing. But, writer's freedom and all that, and it worked well within the story.
| kingsholto chapter 15 . 3/5
Wonderful story. Thank you for writing it.
| redfox-9 chapter 15 . 3/4
This story is truly amazing!
I can't stop reading and re-reading it. Wonderful!
Won't you write a sequel? Please?
Please, please, please?
| Beth9891 chapter 15 . 2/26
This was amazing ;) you should write a sequel where their bond becomes exclusive or a prequel dealing with harry's adventures and events mentioned
| MalB chapter 13 . 2/7
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| Guest chapter 15 . 1/30
Loved the story, it was great
| HP-Lette-Fan chapter 15 . 1/22
Aww this was an amazing story! I absolutely loved it! And the ending! The ending had me smiling like an idiot at my phone! Thank you for taking the time to write this!
| Seolchan chapter 15 . 1/19
I've just finished reading your fic, and I'm quite sad. Not because there is no more chapters, but because, contrary to most of the people who read it, I couldn't really find why it earned so many good reviews. Your writting is good, I don't deny that, but... your story is really uneventful (even if you warned about that, I didn't thought it would be to that extent).
I don't think the relation between Draco and Harry is slow. The pace of your story is, but not their. I mean, they become friends in, what, like 5 minutes? It's this part which should have been slow. It's not that easy to overcome years of hate/dislike. And then, between them is not that slow but always so blurry. I read other fics which are not graphic, but at least, the reader still know what happens. But in your fic, no. So what? Draco feels uneasy about sex, and then a few days after, they slept together and... voilà, it seems it doesn't affect both of them. (and why Harry has to be naked during the first chapter? It seems so out of place in the storyline...)
Harry just seems so perfect and powerful, it's quite annoying. It seems he can do everything, except mastering (yet) an animagus form, fashion skills and Phoenix fire. But he will become an animagus, no doubt about that with Draco/Salazar's help, and master Phoenix fire with Snape's. About fashion? Well, he has Draco for helping him and he knows French designers... He is just sixteen (or seventeen and half, if that makes much difference), but he knows everything about life, friends and magics? I have no problem with Harry being a powerful wizard but here, he always knows what to do. For me, it's not working :/.
And there is one thing I didn't understand: you said since Pansy is a weak witch, she didn't need anyone for her transition. And a few chapters later, you said she did it with Draco? Or did I misread something?
So well, your story is kind of nice, but it doesn't appeal to me (and I'm really sad about that, there are so many good reviews, I wanted to like your story too ;_;).
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/4
Even if you change Draco's birthday to october, he's still older than Harry. To enter year 6, he should've been 16 before the 1st of september. So, yeah, it doesn't make sense that Harry had this weird transition before Draco. I still don't get what happened in this xD
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/4
What the fuck. I have no clue of what's happening. What's a transition?
| HPMARIE chapter 15 . 12/30/2013
Best story ever. No more needs to be said :)
| Yuki082 chapter 15 . 12/11/2013
Oh my gosh that was so incredibly good. Really.
How did you come up with the intricate details of the gifts and such? And the healing! It reminded me a lot of the healing in the Immortals series by Tamora Peirce which just made it seem all the more legit. A lot of times people try to go for this much detail and the story gets lost but this was very well done.
Amazing. Thanks for writing.
| Guest chapter 15 . 12/11/2013
ABSOLUTLEY AMAMAMAMMAMAZING! MY FAVORITE DRACO AND HARRY FANFCI EVER! (And I happen to read ALOT of them) PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!
| BunnyBear27 chapter 15 . 12/7/2013
OMG! This Story was Awesome! There just so much to say that I can't possibly talk about all my favorite parts of this whole FIC. But I do love how the whole story just fit together with how it started and that it fit the title perfectly. (That does not happen often)
THANKS A BILLION (cause a million won't do) for writing this AMZING, AWESOME, EXTRAORDINARY STORY!
LOVED IT! XD!