Reviews for The Final Night
Words-To-Choke-Upon chapter 7 . 6/22/2008
Alright I am very sorry, but this is pretty stupid. It doesn't make sence at all! Have you read the books?
Katchelle87 chapter 7 . 11/20/2007
This is very good!
h2oangel505 chapter 6 . 8/22/2007
i love the concept and ur idea for bella's power is very ceative.. i like it... i really want to find out how Rose died so u should update soon!
Katchelle87 chapter 6 . 8/19/2007
That was cute, and a nice twist.
Keep'ncool chapter 5 . 5/29/2007
I myself have read Twilight and New Moon several times. You have everything correct except that if Bella is a vampire now she would not be able to cry. Other wise what you have so far is awesome. I must say that i hope you get bored over the summer so that you will update. lol
dragonfly454 chapter 5 . 5/17/2007
aw that was so sad!
colorsallaround chapter 5 . 5/16/2007
awsome story, is this edwardbella fic
Mrs. Optimus Prime chapter 5 . 5/16/2007
WHAT? Edward! You love Bella! This is so good. Please update soon. I want to read what happens. Please update soon!

Mrs. Optimus Prime
LittleAlbatross chapter 5 . 5/16/2007
Just a few tidbits for you to consider: Edward's "mom" is named Esme, not Esmet. Also, when Bella woke up after being unconscious for two weeks, she probably would have devoured that doctor. She'd be one very hungry, non-"vegetarian" vampire. It takes a lot of work to get those topaz eyes, just think of Jasper. One last thing, she wouldn't have been able to go to sleep after she woke up in the hospital. Vampires don't sleep.
BrownEyedGurl chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
That is an awesome line! the lion and the lamb thing! awesome!
Touchwood chapter 4 . 3/10/2007
I love the bit where Edward tells Bella that her human years are the best of her life...very affecting. Be sure to watch sentence grammer. No one's perfect, but I did notice that you contain alot of periods in your sentences, but try using commas to make it flow better. Other than that, great job and I look forward to more
Igor Lollipop chapter 4 . 3/9/2007
Oh noes!

Not a cliffy.


Update soon, I love this story!
Miyu Mira chapter 4 . 3/7/2007
Not bad thanks for the heads up on the update! Update soon! XD
h2oangel505 chapter 4 . 3/1/2007
chapter are to freaking short! ahahah pleas make them longer! other than that i like it
bleachalamode chapter 1 . 2/28/2007 are a great writer :D.

I have 1 question though...IS CHAPTER 4 THE END?

I would seriously die...
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