|Reviews for Abandon Ship|
| bananacupcakes chapter 15 . 7/5/2010
Please update soon :)
Can we get to some 'action' between harry and dean soon?
| Niwaki chapter 15 . 7/2/2010
Snape insuing his one survivel? (mock gasp) but that's such a SLYTHERIN tactic? (Horror)!
I really loved this story and I like the way you continue to speak to your audience. I like that you seem to care about or comments and opinions but still have your own, more or less, clear plan on where to take this fic
I'm sorry if my first sentence seems mocking that wasn't my intention(I've been flamed over a review like this, so I'm just making sure that it, hopefully, will not result in that) I' running on 26 hours without sleeps and am only awake because of the amazing gift from the gods called coffeine or otherwise black, black coffe...
Love Daphne, Dean and Andrew though I'm surprised to say that I believe I just might be growing a soft spot for Patrick... unbelieveble...
by the way you mentioned that you couldn't find any stories about Harry/ Dean at some point right? well heres one of my fav. Nights of Insomnia by Bittersweet Alias- it's rated M and is pretty heavy slash if you don't like that ignore that I mentioned it but if you like it, it's one of the best there is and the first Dean/ Harry I've ever read
please continue soon
the menace that can't sleep-
| Niwaki chapter 11 . 7/2/2010
since you asked for comments to this chapter I shall enlight you;)
first the story is written in a smooth flow that are really good at captuing ones attention. Futhermore the contest is both funny and entertaining while always having a seriousness(the evil take-over plan) just underneath the joyfull suroundings
one thing I miss a little is details, especially when you shift scene. it didn't really matter with the ROR in this chapter since you descriped ot earler... actually right now I can't really think of a good exampel at the top of my head, but I did miss a little more detail of the surroundings or circumstandings with scene shifts
I've not read all you have written yet
so I'll review more when I have... sorry for any spelling mistakes(english isn't my first language)
| Proof of Nothing chapter 5 . 6/27/2010
Having started re-reading this story AGAIN I came over 'Daily Profit' as you had written it and thought; Wasn't it Daily Prophet?
Thus I googled it and seems I am right. Thought you'd want to know and possibly correct it.
In case you don't believe me; ts. wollzelle assets / 2007 / 11 / 21 / daily-prophet. jpg
Just remove the spaces.
| baracudas chapter 15 . 6/4/2010
i rea;;y like it! please finish
| ryencoke chapter 15 . 6/4/2010
I love the story so far, all the intrigues and stuff but still easy to follow. I was disappointed to see it was abandoned before we got to any Harry/Dean lovin' but am still subscribing to story alerts in case you take it up again at some point. Still, the 15 chapters you had written were great and I really enjoyed Patrick. I was also just a bit relieved that you stopped where you did as I somehow had a bad feeling regarding Patrick's future.
| ryencoke chapter 4 . 6/4/2010
I want a little brother Patrick...or maybe a miniature Patrick doll. OH GOD...what if Patrick and Dobby become friends? The horror!
| Kataleena chapter 15 . 5/31/2010
Hi. *waves* If you are not, in fact, dead (which would be very sad) and still check this account, could you let me know if this is abandoned, or better yet, give your fans an update? I really like this and would love to read more, but the lack of update in the past two years leads me to believe that it's abandoned...
| Renesmeelover12 chapter 15 . 4/27/2010
| harrylover101 chapter 15 . 4/14/2010
I truly enjoyed reading this, i look forward your
| Windy Rein chapter 15 . 2/26/2010
Ooh, I've had so much fun reading this :D Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Umm, Harry plotting a revolution is always fun to see but this stands out as it doesn't take itself too seriously and Harry isn't dark as he usually is in this kind of fics :)
But what makes me appreciate this the most is the way I can remember the central OCs so well and not go "huh? who's that? was it...no, it wasn't them that was..." if you get my point :D
So, umm, what else... I like the way you've described the kidnappings, it's different and different is always nice to see :) I'll have to say I liked the vanishing on top of the Astronomy Tower the most but then again it ties with Erika's reaction to her kidnapping :D Made my day that one... :D "Umm, professor, I'm one of the victims it seems" (or that's what I came up with in five seconds xD)
But yeah, adore the kidnappings :)
I hope you're continuing writing this and hope that one day you'll update again but if you don't that's alright too :)
| Rachel chapter 4 . 2/25/2010
I lovvee ,Patrick. He reminds me of this kid at my school who has the same name and acts like that. (but hes an annoying little prick)
| A Violet Kind Of Violence chapter 15 . 1/29/2010
Please update soon!
| Blackest-Appologies chapter 15 . 1/23/2010
:looks around frantically for the next chaoter button: where'd it go? Omg I need more! I love how dean acts in this fic! Well I'm off to read your profile for the resin you abandoned this.
| Blackest-Appologies chapter 13 . 1/23/2010
Wow I think I've read this story before but I don't rember if I reviewed or got very far. And wow why did Harry just say no to dean? Oh crap he's gonna be heartbroken! Well I'm off to read the next chapter.