Reviews for Naruto: Legend in the Making
Animeworld2.0 chapter 7 . 11/3/2024
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Sangteakhiangte chapter 7 . 11/3/2024
Why so similar to canon,make naruto smart and strong
Guest chapter 8 . 6/22/2024
This is a old story but I will say you missed out on the opportunity to introduce Karin Uzumaki since she was part of Kusa during the Chunin exams before she ended up with Orochimaru
gabelou1991 chapter 4 . 10/27/2023
Le seul défaut que je pourrais trouver à cette histoire est le fait qu'on dirait trop le canon alors qu'avec la relation avec hiashi naruro aurait su évoluer plus vite et avzc kurenai et asuma il aurait dû avoir des bases plus solides car même si cela aurait pu être le canon c'est trop proche.
Crevanille chapter 2 . 10/22/2022
This Hanabi is pretty cute!
Darkfang333 chapter 3 . 10/12/2021
you liar you said you wouldn't let it die but there's only 37 chapters and you last updated in 2013 that's just over 8 years Ago other than that the story is good
Guest chapter 37 . 6/1/2021
WTF!
Etro champion chapter 12 . 5/30/2021
You kind of screwed the story over when you have Sakura go to a restaurant with Naruto in order spaghetti and a Japanese anime manga comic book one interpretation and then they go to a non-fictional museum inside the hidden Leaf Village wtf come to mind this is why fanfiction is atrocious the story is great but the rest of it usual your imagination because I don't think I last checked in the anime they had a museum don't get me wrong you're great white up but when you do that and take the people out of the story and that ruins it I'm trying to give you constructive feedback take it how you see it
Etro champion chapter 7 . 5/29/2021
It's not a bad story I've seen far worse thanks for trying at least too bad this was discontinued
But the story did have potential
Priest chapter 37 . 6/1/2020
I do like the story and I would love to see you continue it someday.
Kingkong101 chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Nothing has changed Naruto is still a retard
Guest chapter 4 . 8/17/2019
Seriously why the hell is naruto still just a shit stain he didnt bother learning or listening to people. He still the same annoying gremlin he went to the academy 5 years and still had no common sense or any beat into him I mean really..?
Guest chapter 3 . 8/17/2019
What is this shit you literally just have the fucking intro to the series that's all. He spent extra time at the academy and had friends but what stays the same stupid overly sensitive dipshit. Really just really?
Bobert chapter 4 . 8/12/2019
You ended up writing the same story as the original just with extra dialogue...noone likes that, its lazy.
Monster King chapter 37 . 5/20/2019
Great job please continue
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