Reviews for William's Penance
AngelOfTheMoor chapter 1 . 10/1/2007
I liked your story overall. There was one minor problem I had, though. You started to use Annie's name before Bush knew it, and I thought the story was from Bush's point-of-view, so it confused me for a second. That's not really a big deal, though.

I think this is a great sequel to your other story, "Give the Devil His Due!" Again, I got a little weepy. The ending is very touching, and you depict Bush's emotions really well and accurately. That was a wonderful story!