Reviews for hurting the one I love
rhea lupin chapter 11 . 1/9/2010
I loved this story! But we never got one answer: Why did James kiss Kelly in the first place?
rhea lupin chapter 10 . 1/9/2010
Really cute. I loved the last lines!
rhea lupin chapter 9 . 1/9/2010
Still can't see the beta thing, but I love the story. :D
rhea lupin chapter 8 . 1/9/2010
Love it!

(I really should learn how to write well-rounded reviews.)
rhea lupin chapter 7 . 1/9/2010
I love this, but I can't believe someone BETAED it. No offence to your beta, I'm sure she's perfectly nice, but her editing needs work!
rhea lupin chapter 6 . 1/9/2010
*sighs*

Ela.
rhea lupin chapter 5 . 1/9/2010
Angst makes me ... angsty. :D Love!
rhea lupin chapter 4 . 1/9/2010
Again, the ending was AMAZING.
rhea lupin chapter 3 . 1/9/2010
Ending was brilliant!
rhea lupin chapter 2 . 1/9/2010
GREAT!

Love it.
rhea lupin chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I love these plots. :D
shelly chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
Lily Luna is harry's child Lily Evans is harry's mother and james's wife
buttonbit chapter 11 . 7/8/2008
Was that the end?

You used some adjectives too often in a paragraph, for instance 'emotionally' is used a lot...

I like the plot though and I'd like you to write more stories!
BlueSkyMornings chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
aw how sad. I wonder if he heard her say that. probably not.
Kasabe chapter 11 . 7/25/2007
that's the sweetest story i've read in a long time and it makes you want to

Squeal with delight
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