Reviews for Sient Tears
angel chick1589 chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
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Nicotine chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
This is a good story, and you've got lots of talent to write it.

The WWE was in Houston on Tuesday September 11, 2001; the plan was to record Thursday night's SmackDown that evening. So, none of the wrestlers were on the East Coast. Give them a reason for stilling being in New Yotk; it will make more sense to people who can't forget the events of that day.

The North Tower (the first one that was hit was called Tower 1); the South Tower (the second one that got hit, but fell down first was Tower 2). Unless Jeff was planning to have breakfast at Windows on the World in the North Tower (and nobody escaped from there), that's the only reason he would have been in that tower at that hour of the morning. If had wanted to see from the view from the observation deck, he would have been in the South Tower (Tower 2), and he couldn't have been in before 9:00, since the tours didn't start allowing people to observation level until then.

But there's no reason why Jeff couldn't be helping people escaping the buildings. You could even have a funny exchange between some snobby security broker is his Armani suit versus Jeff's torn blue jeans and scruffy appearance. When God is sending a real-life angel to help you escape, you shouldn't be judging him on his looks.

The story's good. I just think you need some more to flesh out a bit, and also explain why Matt, Jeff and Triple H are not in Houston, where they would have been supposed to be.

Good luck with your story.
Pinayprincesa chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
aw poor Jeff:( Hope he will b ok