|Reviews for First Child|
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/4
That was the best series and fan fiction I've ever read. You should write more for this series.
| CatLover444 chapter 4 . 1/16
Very Funny and Cute for a little Girl!
| CatLover444 chapter 3 . 1/16
| CatLover444 chapter 2 . 1/16
| CatLover444 chapter 1 . 1/16
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/21/2013
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| LovelySheree chapter 4 . 7/22/2013
This was genius! It's writers like you that make me want to write! Thanks for posting this, I laughed my butt off!
| ariana.madrigal.587 chapter 1 . 7/19/2013
naruto will be a good daddy
| haipa ookami chapter 4 . 7/2/2013
| poornmiserable chapter 4 . 11/1/2008
aaw...this is so cute such a shame you apparently lost inspiration...well these little drabbles rock
| Illucida chapter 4 . 8/3/2008
These four drabbles are very cute, and are a joy to read. I hope that one day you write more. _
| POCKETSTAR chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
| iigaken chapter 4 . 8/25/2007
this story is soo cute
| Toreh chapter 4 . 5/24/2007
lol aki likes porn! lol this is so cute i luv aki
| Niobe Jones chapter 4 . 4/10/2007
Aw! This is like super cute! I really liked the last drabble the best. Kakashi's last line was priceless!