Reviews for One Moment
YukiHasAMercedes chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
Smellershot is AMAZING.
helium lost chapter 1 . 9/24/2006
I love this line: "Jet had been irritated when the boy would not respond to his questions, until the boy turned and really looked at Jet." It just fits my image of Longshot so perfectly :D

Lovely fic; I love to see good Smellershot. XD

- hl
Clone Number 5 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Oh! :melts:

Adorable. Short, simple, and very cute. I love how you portrayed their relationship, and their teamwork. That last line really sums up how much they seem to care and look out for each other.
Jesus.Lives chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Thank you for writing Smellershot. Meep! So cute at the end.

Just one note: they didn't know they were firebenders. In fact Smellerbee kept persisting that they probably weren't. So they wouldn't have thought that.

But do another! PLEASE! MORE!