|Reviews for Total Annihilation Last Resource|
| joe2thatetheridge chapter 1 . 3/23/2015
Mate I really like your writing could you do an assassins creed black flag.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 5/15/2006
I can sum this up with one word: intense. I am a TA player and can vouch that all details are reasonably accurate. Good job, I can feel the air of teamwork just by reading this.
| Natination chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
i see a few unit mistakes... but who cares, nice story...
| jash1434 chapter 1 . 2/22/2003
i play total anhiallation all the time on my computer.. this was a very good story. very well written. i wish it was longer thought.
| Will Wilson chapter 1 . 5/14/2002
This was good, but the grammer needs some work.
Other than that, I would say that this story was well written and had a great action packed story line. One bad thing- where were the Zeus Kbots? I love those little guys...
| Commander Devron chapter 1 . 12/21/2001
The story was good up until this point"Mothers sobbing over lost ones..." The Core are supposed to be a race of machines with human brain patterns, not organics! Haven't you heard of the patterning process or Central Conciousness? Anyway I still think it was good up until that point.