Reviews for Unscheduled stop between the 4th and 5th floor
Shadir chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Poor Jack ºº
IliveforGod chapter 1 . 11/19/2006
That was such a neat idea! I loved it!
nobodyliveshere chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Oh my god, I love the way you wrote Jack in, although skim reading it's hard to tell how many people are in the elevator at one given time, still good though!

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Elysian Jasmine
Kiliko chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
Not that I like Jack or anything, but that wasn't very nice of Clay to trap Jack in the elevator. He could near suffocate-hey, put that in you not chapter!