Reviews for Breaks
Gwaihiril chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
You write Newsies too? That just made my day. You were one of the first authors to get me addicted to Tim/Kon, and now you write another favorite pairing.

That was a great look into Jack's psyche. I think he would be as clueless as you described him - thank goodness he finally figured it out! The way he figured it out and his reaction seemed really in character to me. Also, I like how you had a bit of the way he talked (dropping the g's, certain phrases), but you didn't make the vowels weird or unable to read.

I really hope there's another fic coming, hopefully with David in it!