A great story. Very good.

I'd love to see this turned into a series. I think that her running into one of the other characters from the Buffyverse would be very interesting.

Continuing the story? Hellz ya...get on with it already...please.

That was an excellent chapter. I especially loved the part at the end. If it wasn't obiously prose, I'd call it poetry. If only Illyria was real...

Hello,

Your Illyria stories have been very good. I hope you continue this into a series, and keep the series focused on Illyria becoming human.

Thank you for writing.

Definitely please continue this, either as more chapters or a separate stories.

Please feel free to check out my story "Shakespeare Be Damned!" In my story, Fred's reemergence and merger with Illyria doesn't happen as slowly or subtly. But you might enjoy it as much as I enjoy your storyline.