|Reviews for Water and Fire|
| Living in Darkness chapter 13 . 5/12
aww this is a wonderful story, is different and so beautiful
I love it!
| Valerie Michaelis chapter 13 . 4/17
an amazing work, simply beautiful.
| mtnikolle chapter 13 . 7/31/2014
This is a fantastic story! I enjoyed reading very much :)
| young kagome chapter 4 . 7/6/2014
| Kiara chapter 13 . 6/25/2014
That story was amazing so well done. Thank you for taking the time to think of it, write it, and then publish it for all to read. I enjoyed every minute as I continued reading. So I thank you
- A grateful fanfiction fan Kiara
| Deb.23 chapter 13 . 4/22/2014
Are you some kind of author or what? No... dont deny it. The last part was perfect. It was like I was reading a book like that. Who published the book? Who was Souta reading it to? Fantastic job, by the way...
| Hmm chapter 13 . 1/21/2014
Pretty good but some words are either spelt incorrectly or used incorrectly. For example in this chapter you use the word 'immoral' instead of 'immortal' which means long-lived. Immoral means literally without morals. Also you tend to miss 's' in plural words like 'features' when referring to a person's face, shape, and so forth. Feature means as in one aspect of a person's appearance, features, means their whole face not bits of it.
Your in need of a beta I think or at least a good round of proof-reading for this ficlet.
| Kaoruhana chapter 13 . 1/21/2014
I loved this story. I think what I enjoyed most about it was the different Kagome's over the years. Each one was unique but her at the same time and eventually they all become a part of her. I look forward to reading this story again and again!
| reader chapter 13 . 10/6/2013
this was an amazing story and I want to thank u for being f*****epic
| AnimeLova-T chapter 13 . 8/26/2013
This story was awsome i loved the ending part the best because it makes you feel like you were the the actual person/child being read it to. Keep up the good work, Love ya :D.
| fuyuki-hime chapter 13 . 4/22/2013
Absolutely fantastic! Your story left me aching and speechless. I sat there for an hour after I finished reading it, my emotions in turmoil. I don't know the words to tell you how amazing it was, thank you for sharing!
| Guest chapter 13 . 3/2/2013
OMG! This is none of the sweetest stories I've ever read. i love your potrayal of sesshoumaru. mob luv. keep writing. cant wait for your other stories
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/23/2013
Really it is amazing story
two thumbs up for u
| ReadxReview chapter 13 . 2/3/2013
AMAZING! I really enjoyed that thank you so much for having the imagination to think up this intricate story. I stayed up all night just to finish reading it. :D I am so happy that Kagome returned and she wasn't just Yokononishi anymore because part of the way through the story I started freaking out about Kagome and how she seemed so...differently and totally not Kagome.
I did think that it was a little weird for her friends to accept that she was a youkai so easily and stuff like that without getting really scared, but whatever. ;D
| XXX-NaughtyFanFictionLover-XXX chapter 5 . 12/23/2012
Love the ending of this chapter... Keep up the great work!