Reviews for The One That Got Away
JrOeKnEeRe chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
I really liked this especially the second chapter. You gave me exactly what I was looking for. Minority Report is playing right now to the side of my screen and your story is on the other haha. Please keep going? It's getting really good D
ANNA chapter 2 . 10/2/2007
How could you stop writing they were great chapters!