|Reviews for Yellowing Paper|
| Battywattywoo chapter 7 . 11/19/2012
Haha, 25 years ago I used to fancy Walter; and I once encountered a girl online who said she used to have a crush on Danny. If Walter & Danny were to become an item, that chick and I would have to console each other, maybe have a major chocolate binge.
| ramapith chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
"And it was at that moment that Walter finally understood them, even though neither Minnie or Dennis hadn't quite yet."
This is So. Damn. Good. I notice that it's years since you've written it, and maybe you never check its comments anymore—but just in case you do, know that you've brought these characters to life like nobody else.
(Awright... Mike Pearse comes close. And sure, the older actual Beano strips are often a lot of fun. But then, they weren't trying to make the characters REAL. You've done that, too, which is simply amazing. Er—don't try to introduce Baby-Face Finlayson. He might implode.)
| phinbellafan chapter 7 . 2/6/2011
Although it's been about three years since you last updated and you have probably grown out of the Beano, I shall review this masterpiece anyway. :)
Let me just say wow. I absolutely love this story, this plot, this couple, this humour... in fact, you could just say that I love everything about this story.
I really wish you hadn't stopped as I extremely want to see what the ending would've been. Yeah I know I could always think of an ending, but that would just my little fan-fiction of this fan-fiction (LOL) and besides, I would still wonder what the real ending would have been. :
So erm... bye and thanks for reading this review. I guess you've inspired me to write something, so expect another Beano story to appear in the Beano category.
PS: Thanks for writing such a wonderful story! And I really hope you decide to carry on this fan-fiction! :)
| xXBWFXx chapter 7 . 9/21/2009
Seeming as this was updated in 2008, I guess there's no pount in my asking you to continue.
Ah well. I will anyway.
| Chris Hakes Age 13 chapter 3 . 6/28/2009
I love this fanfic it is really good and quite funny It is really well written so thank you.
| Joeflo chapter 7 . 12/30/2008
Ok this is good, except it is Walter who is the bully properly because he pretends to be nice.
| Cip chapter 7 . 11/15/2008
I'm completley inthralled by this story, please please update soon!
| Cip chapter 5 . 11/15/2008
just thought I'd send a review to say that I LOVE this story, and yes I know the nativity play you mentioned? the one where the stage falls down and only Toots and baby Jesus are left standing?
| anon chapter 6 . 9/21/2008
Cool! Go Walter! lol. It's wierd saying that! MORE PLEASE! I love it. wanna find out what happens next. Bring on chapter 8. as soon as poss puhleeze before i burst from the suspense of being kept waiting!
| cossacks chapter 6 . 2/12/2008
I love this story. Keep writing!
| Werepuppy Black chapter 6 . 12/27/2007
have i mentioned how much i love this fic? (and gotta argee - bash street's singled out is pretty much the best thing in the comic anymore) Another fantastic chapter!
Can't wait to read more
(not very original I know but im working on a brain which has only had a couple of hours of sleep)
| SuperTD chapter 4 . 7/12/2007
I really like this story, update soon!
| xxxskyxxx chapter 4 . 6/16/2007
wow this is like the best story ever! as well as your other one and the legends of beanotown one lol
please update soon!
| Werepuppy Black chapter 4 . 5/26/2007
I only just noticed had gained a Beano section. I love the Beano and your fic is fantastic!
I love the way that you've set up the characters - keeping them close enough to their papers conterparts that they're recogniseable but giving them 'layers'
Please continue with this fic - I want to see where its going.
Fastanstic fic all round.
| The Unknown Name chapter 3 . 4/26/2007
I am 13 and I still get the beano weekly, my sister always reads it after so your not alone! I've got a beano fic so can you read that and see how it is? THank you! :)