|Reviews for From the Ashes|
| YamotoBlade chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
okay this is strange but great. Mysterious characters and a brilliant plot. You did good here.
| DeathlyPhoenix chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
um, that was really good, don't get me wrong! just what on earth was happening at the end?
| Pied Flycatcher chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Well, that left me... confused. I didn't understand the ending at all. The writing itself is pretty good but you need to watch your tenses. The story slipped into present tense a few times - I suggest proofreading it to correct the mistakes.
Also, I think you need to set the scene more. There's no sense of place in the first few paragraphs and I don't understand where Hermione and Ron came from or why the Triwizard Cup was there.
| Orocosos chapter 1 . 9/25/2006
This is probably one of the best one-shots I have read of this length. I was intrigued throughout the entire piece, and I felt that the ending sufficiently concluded the story. I'm a little confused as to who the three characters are at the end and what happens to Harry. I look forward to reading your other stories.