Reviews for Ramen Delivery
Nanri K chapter 6 . 3/30/2014
:'D oh gosh, you are so funny and not to mention a great writer, quite rare
Guest chapter 13 . 12/8/2013
I don't like Naruto in this. As soon as he gets Sasuke, he starts pressuring him into a threesome with Itachi just because he thinks that would be hot. (He didn't even care that Sasuke was uncomfortable with it and went and talked to Itachi about it before Sasuke even agreed!) Did he get bored with Sasuke that quickly? If Naruto had stuck around, how many other threesomes would he have pushed Sasuke into? Would he have wanted an "open" relationship? Gross.

There's no excuse for the way Naruto left either. What was up with the note he left? "I love you" and that's it? No attempt at an explanation? No "I'll be back in a week"? Nothing? What a cruel way to break Sasuke's heart. You're right, you were dropping hints the whole way that Naruto was probably going to be leaving, so why didn't he tell Sasuke that he wasn't meant to stay? Sasuke might not have gotten so needlessly hurt if Naruto had been a little more honest! (Another reason why him pushing Sasuke into that threesome was a dirty thing to do. Naruto opened an Uchihacest can of worms, now Sasuke is left alone to deal with the fallout.)

SasuNaruSasu is my OTP, but I vastly prefer Kiba in this story. He's been a really good friend to Sasuke since the beginning and I like the slow build-up their pairing has had. And overall, he comes across as far more sincere to me than Naruto. It's too bad that Kiba is currently involved with Shino, but he and Sasuke are currently figuring out their feelings. What happened with the kissing in this chapter was unexpected for both of them and they both kind of knew it was wrong, so that's why it hasn't crossed a line into "cheating" for me yet. As long as they continue to go slow and come to a firm decision about where they think this is heading before things get out of control then it's fine. I hope this isn't a confused friendship thing and that they've genuinely grown to care about one another. I'd really like for Sasuke to stick with Kiba, a guy who has truly proven himself (taking that job with Orochimaru for Sasuke's sake really does show he cares!), rather than go back to Naruto whenever he decides to come back. Team KibaSasu. XD
Guest chapter 13 . 9/16/2013
Update, update, update, please!
Thank you _
Guest chapter 13 . 8/22/2013
oh my god next chapter is needed!
Grioxjay chapter 13 . 7/13/2013
I really want naruto to come back, but, I wonder what would happen if he did. Would sasuke reject him? Aauughhhh just KEEP WRITING
Kittens Kat chapter 13 . 3/23/2013
MORE PLEASE AND PLEASE BRING NARUTO BACK!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/6/2012
Are you ever going to finish this? It's an excellent story!
Merofero chapter 5 . 2/21/2012
I'm pretty sure this chapter is self-evident that boys can pretty amazing yaoi.
czxw chapter 13 . 2/8/2012
Did Naru come back D:
YourLittleRavenUkeToy chapter 11 . 10/18/2011
GAAAHH! THIS IS TO SAD! pwease make naru-seme come back (cries) and making him go made me lose interest... somehow TT
xxYukiKagamixx chapter 13 . 10/14/2011
I love this story, sad and a bit of angst at the end but all in all great story. I loved it. Please write more soon, I want to know, do they meet again? Does Sasuke go with Orochimaru like in the episodes? ... O.O ... do they get back together for a happy ending T_T omg... next chapter soon...thoughts driving me potty ;p
rikachan chapter 13 . 9/13/2011
U CANNOT LEAVE IT THERE! DAMMID!
krazylittlekat chapter 13 . 9/11/2011
i'm still kinda wondering y naruto left and where he went ,plus in the threesome i was kinda expecting a part where naruto wud b the bottom for itachi while sucking saskue off and on top of that i wonder wat shino is gonna think when and if he finds out wats happening with kiba and saskue
khnoirnya chapter 9 . 6/27/2011
Ok a few things: 1) u r one perverted young man but that just makes u awesome 2) threesome was awesome! o 3) when kiba bit naruto in my head kiba's a really cute puppy. Ok rant over. Please keep writing awesome male Yaoi writer! And I will worship u forever! :)
disbelief chapter 6 . 5/22/2011
i cant believe I just read this
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