|Reviews for What If|
| machievelli chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Supposed to have been posted 7 July 2012, at and the Coruscant Entertainment Center in my The Critic's Two Cents. My computer went down again in June of 2012 with a virus. Then in late November kotorfanmedia went down for reasons unknown, so I was stymied in my attempts to post the reviews. I had waited for it to revive, but you on deserve your reviews.
Pre Mandalorian Wars: Two children and a Jedi Knight...
This is the second time Knightskye had graced my pages. The problem with this piece is it is too short to really get a feel for the presented thought. The title implies different possibilities, but none are suggested.
| The Penguin Squad chapter 1 . 10/2/2006
Very cute, I love little kids!
My one question is though,
Why didn't Trig just run around her? Its not as if she's 100 feet by 100 feet.
| FeeldaForce chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
aww they're little kiddies! lol! the story was great! i love this what if idea! its kinda funny, when vandar said dont think anything of it, well, they should've because trigg (who's revan at the time) and bastila fall in love...ironic really, lol! great cant wait for next one!
| Fall Out Guirl chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
that was just cute. I've read ur other fan fics, and this is one of my faves. great job!
| lOngshotOR chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Sounds good, but I agree with BaM, on the fact that it is a little too short. But otherwise it sounds great.
A What If? Hm... how about... Malak had been redeemed and Revan had stayed dark, what would the final confrontation been like?
| Bald as Malak chapter 1 . 9/26/2006
It's a nice short scene, with some nice little bits.
But it's a bit too short. There's not enough so that it feels like a story on its own. Which means, essentially, that I don't come out of it with a sense of what the "what if" is here, which was your objective as I understand it. So, it needs a bit more to fill it out.
Keep on writin'