|Reviews for Heart, We Will Forget Him|
| Kittenmommy chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Awww! Poor Janice! :(
| SadArticle chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
After posting my own little Yeoman Rand ficlet, more an apology for 'The Enemy Within', I thought I would look up 'the competition', as it were! This is the sort of story I would love to have turned my short scene into, had I seen more than half of one of the films (sorry confession to make!) I love the cyclical narrative - 'not lovers. Never lovers' - and how strong you make Janice. I've always wondered about the attraction between Kirk and Rand, and if she really wanted to take their relationship further. When they finally do get together in your story, they are equals, which I think is best - and I love the line, 'This is the real you, isn't it?' Like he's finally seeing Janice, and not Yeoman Rand. Expressive dialogue and beautiful writing, thank you.
| Roach Patrol chapter 1 . 12/24/2007
Man, this was sad. Very sharp and pretty... I always wondered what happened to poor Rand. I like what you've given her, it feels very sweet and appropriate...