Reviews for With Five Steps Down
yellow331akb3 chapter 1 . 11/30/2014
I was really liking this story, but at the end I was really not getting it. I just don't understand what is happening with this?
Aquarius Galuxy chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
this was beautiful. Love the links between fighting and intimacy, and your writing style. Thank you for sharing!
Ravengal101 chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
I really like your writing style. This was well written; I wish it was longer though.
hellohworld chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
I've been writing short reviews lately, but that was good. Satisfying.
animesweetie chapter 1 . 4/28/2008
I know I've read this before but I don't think I reviewed.

Good work ] I really like how you explain the fight. It switches a lot, but that's okay. Drags out the fight and their little scene. Haha ]
Elephantie chapter 1 . 10/5/2007 god...

what are you like some kind of writing god!


i loved it all! every single bit had me shivering in delight.

and the way you described it was just it was more than that! i was kinda angry that you only got 5 reviews when you should have like 500 or more! XP

anyways i loved it! nejiten forever!
nothing but blue chapter 1 . 7/16/2007
great job! I loved the style of it! :D
Riana1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
Well done all around.
Aikiko-Ashra chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Yeah. I really like this story too. It was really creative! Great job!
123456 chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Wow, interestingly written! I loved it! It's getting harder and harder to find good NejiTen stories like this these days :(
Spirit Evolution chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Nice oneshot. I don't think I've actually read a story in that particular tense before...I know it's third person, but it the way you wrote it makes it feel different somehow.

Keep up the good work, ne?