Reviews for Enemies in Disguise
spider lillies chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
You captured Jet quite well in this. It's a nice piece that depicts his paranoia, shame and pride all in one. Rarely have I seen charactirization done this well in a fanwork. And that's all truth. ;)
mental hospital escapee chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
Poor Jet...I love him so much.

Ah! I got your review for Prey. The sad part is now I'm regretting tbat I killed Jet.
jlacey chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
it was ok )
Watcher of the Hearts chapter 1 . 11/4/2006
oohh good job so far _
The Blind Bandit chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
OMG. I read every single Smellershot in your story-thing.

And you're simply an amazing writer. Especially this one, I love how you described it as "an old film reel". Wonderful writing, my friend!

Egglette chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
:o Oh snap, actual fluff! I really only rarely right real fluff I realize.

Wonderful. You've got a nice style; to the point and easy to read. Flowed well, I like the old film reel line.
MormonMaiden chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
Loved the last line...very powerful. I already reviewed Queen of Omashu, but I would again if you would update faster _

Lol, and Have a Nice Life refers to the fact that if I die before I get to see (talk/review/PM) you again, I want you to be happy...and because it vaguely creeps people out. But its MOSTLY a kind-hearted thing to say.


Have a Nice Life!
Philosopher chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
I've read all of your LongerBee fics today and they are like a drug to me. Please supply more. Thank you.
Princess Falling Star chapter 1 . 9/28/2006
that was a good story, I love all of you longerbee stories