|Reviews for Captive of the Immortal|
| TaliaFosness chapter 16 . 7/15/2013
| TaliaFosness chapter 15 . 7/15/2013
oh... holy shit...
| TaliaFosness chapter 4 . 7/15/2013
| xxXXxx chapter 17 . 5/28/2013
Really I dont mean to be rude but...COME ON!
Its so boring! Nothing has happened! She just wanders round the grounds and sits next to her master!
Let her almost die at the hands of Athian again, but not with a single fang to the thumb...I mean...SERIOUSLY?
I like the concept of this story, but its format is so boring!
add more danger! more lust! ANYTHING!
| Carol chapter 17 . 1/1/2013
Please please keep going! It is soo good right now! I can't tell if I like james right now only because he is randomly deranged. Also is drug a word? Haha I'm stupid. Please keep it a going love it!
| Emmalea chapter 17 . 9/20/2012
Why o why did u stop writing this?! It's so good and now I'm really sad cause I need to know how u would end the story
| Keidi chapter 17 . 12/7/2011
NO, no, no, you an not stop here ! Please write more, PLEASE ! :D
| MysticBird106 chapter 17 . 10/30/2011
I can't believe it ends here! Please write more as i'm hooked and want to read what happens next :(
| VooduRea chapter 17 . 8/25/2011
Plz hurry up and make more!
| dazzeld mom chapter 17 . 8/17/2011
I really like this story and I know you haven't written anything in a long time but I sure hope you'll finish it in the future...
| gilly princess chapter 17 . 6/27/2011
This story is amazing, I love the whole "you don't know me" thing going on with Athan and Rebecca its cute and you work it in well through out the story I am really enjoying this story and I hope u bring out more chapters soon )
| crAzyweirdAbnokshis1 chapter 17 . 5/29/2011
this is a amazing story! I reallly hope you update soon I cant wait to find out what happens between Rebecca and Athan! XD
| vampiregoddess21 chapter 16 . 10/16/2010
Please can you add more chapters to this story, I have been reading it for some time now and this story is excellent. I know there is a chapter after this one but i have already read that one, I would really like it if you could update this story and add lots more brilliant chapters like the ones you have already written.
Thanks very much
| VictoriaVenin chapter 17 . 8/15/2010
I think its a real shame that u have chose to not continue with this story its really good and I have read alot of vampire fiction and this is by far my favorite u should really consider continuing with this story
| Unknown chapter 4 . 2/21/2010
Chardonay is a white wine fyi. Therefore I am confused as to how she would think it is blood. I am a server and all the chardonay I have seen is white not red.