Reviews for Because it mattered
Solangelo-Ships chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Pinnatus chapter 1 . 6/6/2012
Do beautiful and angsty! There is no action, but you can feel the gears turning in his head. You really portrayed Danny's emotions so well and this short oneshot feels complete. Great job as always!
Ansa88 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
oh my gods...O.O holy jeez danny.

you write so deeply it's wonderful...i'm running out of compliments. oh yeah-PLEASE WRITE A BOOK THEN TELL ME THE TITLE!
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Oh! This is so sad and angsty. It's a really good flow of thoughts and emotions. It keeps building and at first you are happy that Danny finally realizes and then you break down with him when you realize what conclusion he comes to. Really good...

ArellaoftheLuvara chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Oh, Danny... so young to have to face that chronic problem most superheros seem to have: endangerment of loved ones. I have the feeling this may be referring to something in the third season, which I haven't seen yet... I'm currently halfway through the second season.

In regards to this piece, the phrase 'Elegant in its simplicity' comes to mind. Another masterful piece.
4k101 chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
That was a really good job!
skitzofrenic chapter 1 . 10/23/2007
i love it.

very well written

PanthaYay chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
So sad. that my heart melt and freeze at the same time, it feels full but empty and that what makes a good sad story.

happy stories are what i love, but fantastic stories are what i live off.

this is a fantastic story. and it rendered a feeling that only the best can make.

this is even better han some books i read.
Shadewolf7 chapter 1 . 3/14/2007
Third story of yours I've read. Third story of yours I've really liked. You've officially made my Favorite Author's list.
SquirrelGirl13 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Wow...just... wow...


JDPhoenix chapter 1 . 12/8/2006
You're gonna make me cry! That is so sad! But beautiful. I love it!
CharmedNightSkye chapter 1 . 11/17/2006
Wow so angsty, I loved it. The way you had Danny finally realize his feelings for Sam was masterfully done. Danny just has to let his hero complex get in the way of their relationship. Til later readings
Lightning Streak chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
An absolutely beautiful portrayl of Danny's delimma. His internal debate between loving Sam and getting her killed, or leaving her alone and risk losing her is written so well.

Keep up the good work!
Trumpet-Geek chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
This is good. There's the repeated theme in there, and I like the way you wrote it.
watashi wa ichi desu chapter 1 . 9/30/2006
This was a nice, very emotional story. It puts into perspective just what Danny does every day to protect Amity Park, and it is nice to see him realizing that it isn't a game. Your work developing his character is nice, instead of seeing him as just the same old Danny.

You might want to look into finding a beta reader to help with your grammar. Some of the errors left me cringing, and it really took away from the emotion of the story. You definitely have potential as a writer and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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