|Reviews for High School|
| Reality Incorporated chapter 11 . 4/3/2007
Charlie Brown definitely listened to too much Jawbox. Well, that was cool. I'll give that a 10/10 and try to write a Peanuts fanfiction after I get "Some Gift From Heaven" and "Kenneth at 99.7 MHz" done.
| I wuv my Gavvy Pooh chapter 11 . 3/21/2007
Maybe you should change the rating to T. I'm not sure all that implied stuff is good for the kids. Othr than that, it's good
| Fanless chapter 11 . 1/22/2007
Wow. This is exactly what I came in here looking for. Thank you! I knew someone had to be twisted enough to write this! Yay :) I love your (probably) unique angle to these characters that everyone knows. Keep working on it!
| pseudoswede chapter 11 . 1/14/2007
I like the short chapters, actually. Are you trying to create the feel of the 3-4 square peanuts comic? ;D The really short story feel?
Very well written. I am really enjoying it so far.
| mabeuf chapter 11 . 12/2/2006
These are quite possibly the shortest chapters I've ever seen.
| armageddon-incarnate chapter 11 . 12/1/2006
Oh my... both new chapters were very interesting... whew...
Did Schroeder kill Lucy? I hope not... (I kinda like her, despite her being really crabby all the time...)
Great job, only thing is... I would love longer chapters. I realize that you could be doing this for dramatic effect, but longer chapters would make it even BETTER! (I know! Better? Gasp, cough, sneeze! It's impossible!)
| blaspmey chapter 9 . 11/26/2006
OMG SNOOPY HAS RABIES. D: Longer chapters please. :D
| Delibird chapter 6 . 11/16/2006
One small detail about this chapter: Peppermint Patty (I assume it's her and not the other Patty, as she's the one who calls Charlie Brown "Chuck") says “Mine’s no good, my parents are home.” But P. Patty does not have a mother - she lives with her father alone. And while he may have remarried, somehow I doubt that Peppermint Patty would consider the new woman a "parent" after all those years of living without a mother.
Poor Schulz may be turning over in his grave, but fan fiction is often brutal, and I can deal with that. Carry on, please!
| armageddon-incarnate chapter 9 . 11/11/2006
Oh my... Please don't say that Woodstock is dead! That would be sad... boo hoo! Woodstock is my favorite!
Will Linus get bitten? Will he be forced to kill Snoopy? Please write soon!
| mabeuf chapter 9 . 11/11/2006
le gasp! tell me it's not true!
| armageddon-incarnate chapter 8 . 11/3/2006
Oh my... will she die of infection...?
You do an excellent job of writing, and keeping up the suspense, only thing is, I would like longer chapters. This would keep my attention, which is a full time job as it is.
Great job, all in all! Keep it up!
| obsetress chapter 7 . 10/31/2006
Whoa man! Way to leave it suspenseful like that!
| armageddon-incarnate chapter 7 . 10/30/2006
A knife? A gun? His old piano? Let us know soon!
| mabeuf chapter 6 . 10/28/2006
this is funny, and yet so incredibly twisted.
| obsetress chapter 6 . 10/26/2006
I totally saw this one coming. But it works almost too well.