|Reviews for Golden Snake|
| AinoMinako-san chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Wow. That was interesting. It was a very good story, though you might want to go over your spelling one more time. I liked it, except the part about Minako being slightly evil. But you can obviously tell why I feel that way! :) I overlooked that part of the plot, and just enjoyed it. Thanks for writing!
| Chibi Pyro Duo chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
Good- Very chilling. The story was very good. The use of character and language was excellent. You stayed true to the time period and made use of the settings.
Improve- I didn't see much of a character change with Mina. It was all a little choppy. Plus I didn't see the theme or format the 30_H is using. But once again brilliant I don't think I've gotten those chills up my spine in a while.