|Reviews for Perfect Pair|
| AthenaSmile chapter 39 . 3/2
Pulled through reading all.
Yay! time for comment/s.
Ok, let's start with minor issue. There were a lot of spelling/grammar(?) errors that aren't really that bad since you can correct them yourself with the context of the story.
Also, you could probably add in "Action" to your genre since your story doesn't really focus on Romance.(again, this is a minor issue, a suggestion if you may)
Then let's move on with "my" major issues. ("My" because it may not be an issue to others...it's my own criticism on your work. I apologize in advance if I may sound like I'm bashing you but it probably is.)
The story itself is really typical. I guess for a work that is ranked first sorted by no. of favorites, I expected much more, but got disappointed. I really did not read some of your notes at the top on the earlier chapters because I was thinking that it's just you greeting your friends. But then I read something that went like you knowing what to do with your story and not to bash you because THIS is your story. So when I reached the 35th chapter being a Note, I wondered where your confidence before went. It didn't serve some justice on your part for actually "bashing" other people for something you weren't able to fulfill. (Mostly criticizing you and not your work, I apologize for that.) I also didn't see the part where "Ino would have to work hard to get Naruto" or something. Did I perhaps miss a chapter?
Other than all those written above, average story. There's originality in it, I'll give you that, but that's in the battle-action part of this story. It was more of a familial-love story than romantic love. It was bland. 6/10 I guess.
| SaucyHandles chapter 39 . 2/5
This was PERFECTION! 10/10! This story captured so many emotions it's safe to say it's a work of art.
Thank you for writing this!
| NefariousNaruto chapter 39 . 1/16
So, the... summary... yeah, very inaccurate. I would change that, but I do like the story. Obviously rushed towards the end, but that's okay, at least there IS an ending. Great story!
| Shadowed Kitsune Kage chapter 39 . 12/26/2013
HA Love that ending That OC Mizukage got served.
(Is this before Yugra became Mizukage and then did that Bloodline purge thing and where Mei T. revolted and became the Newest Mizukage or is this just like a different Naruto World either way Great story.)
| Adharsh S chapter 39 . 12/21/2013
Amazing fan fiction . Please continue writing other stories.
| Guest chapter 32 . 10/14/2013
and now i will quit reading this story, it officially sucks ass. i hate you as an author, freaking chiches
| Hecseferblade chapter 39 . 10/14/2013
That was amazing, you had me hooked on every word, I'm keeping this in my favorites
| warrof chapter 39 . 8/31/2013
No Offence, That ending seemed really weak. What might have been better is drag this out alittle longer and include a Marriage scene where they all ended up in a happily ever after.
Overall thought it was a good story, 7/10.
| warrof chapter 8 . 8/31/2013
Ino scoffed, "What enemies? Some one plotting to destroy the villages Ramen supply."
I LOVE IT!
| xTLSxDeathTheKid chapter 39 . 8/10/2013
| Lord Sannin chapter 39 . 7/25/2013
| reapertmn3 chapter 39 . 7/19/2013
I was hesitant when I found out what the treaty was, i knew without a doubt that ino and naruto would be together, I just wasn't sure how you where going to pull it off. I think you did an amazing job with the story and it was one of the most well thought, interesting fanfiction I have ever read. I greatly enjoyed it and I would like to thank you personally for giving me something so unique and grand as this.
| Duesal10 chapter 30 . 7/7/2013
Uh-oh... Naruto's in for it... Hopefully Chiyo doesn't get caught in between.
| Guest chapter 39 . 6/21/2013
Better than the manga
| Guest chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
I absolutely love this story, maybe more than the manga (shhh) I just wish naruto learned the rasengan with one hand :(