|Reviews for Ultimate Betrayal|
| therealchamps chapter 2 . 11/7/2012
Well damn. John just gets right to the point doesn't he. Update soon.
| therealchamps chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Randy had always seemed like the playboy type.
| Angela Marie Herrera chapter 2 . 7/10/2011
I like ur y please write more?
| VolcomStoneBabe chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
you need to update.
i need to know what happens next.
| shortee962 chapter 2 . 11/30/2006
I like this story already!
Update again soon please!
| Cena07 chapter 2 . 10/16/2006
Great start! Cant wait to read more!
| CMCE21 chapter 2 . 10/9/2006
LOL. Randy's kinda possessive. I reckon Ash and John should like have an affair. lol.
| Ghostwriter626 chapter 2 . 10/8/2006
dun dun dun lol
| KillerstyleBlvd chapter 2 . 10/8/2006
Awesome chapter Mel. It was really good. I can't wait to see what happens next.
| CMCE21 chapter 1 . 10/1/2006
Ooh! I'm liking this story already! Plz plz plz update soon!
| Ghostwriter626 chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
so far so good
| Ginger James chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
great start,. I get that they aren't as happy anymore but their first meeting was really cute. Cant wait to read more
| Pinayprincesa chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
uh oh what'll happen nxt?
| OTHlover04 chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
that was good
| MizHyde chapter 1 . 9/29/2006
I hope you update this story really soon. I like what you have here so far. Keep up the good work.